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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby InnerCinema » Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:06 pm

Freya_Nightmist wrote:Someone should make a poem since the last word is "lives" let me try ....

Lives have no meaning
When it reaches the point,
Of no return
Only misery can
And misery will
Be your companion
Throughout your journey

You can close your eyes
To things you hate to see
Cover your ears,
So you won't hear,
The pain and noise all around
To this place that you, oh, so loved

But you can't stop
This beating heart's
Feelings and sorrows
That you long to forget



And so I rest in (my) case ....



forget me - i am gone
forgive me - i am done

live another life
without kids and wife

life another way
in my lonesome day

i just have to stay
i just have to stay

forget me i am gone
to the beach i run
to the shore i go
to the waves that flow

down to my waves
down to my waves

better listened little boy,
not to be saved
better listened little toy,
and go back to your waves


(hot or not?)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:03 pm

WTF happened in or on here, a lot of blank accounts, banished ones, guess someone had lots of accounts? Oh well, thanks for the poetry anyways. :cheers:

Forget and forgive
Walk past the hurt
It will help you live
...Longer
Happier....
....and healthier.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby InnerCinema » Thu Oct 30, 2014 12:24 am

healthier you are, when you take the car
to travel far, to leave the scar
to create your dream, live your scene
be my queen
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby BrooksWindow » Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:34 am

Queen of the laundry they dubbed her thee
taking no breaks said her children of three
washing and drying flailing about
this queen said ''that's it, ordered chinese
and tried not to pout
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Wed Nov 05, 2014 6:33 pm

Brooks.. I like your poem *_* I'll make a little poem later, time is limited
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkEmpress » Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:23 pm

limited are my hours with you
as my hands follow the lines of your arms

when we embrace on the shoreline
of our destinies

when we see each other for the first time
when we fall in love

limited is the time i have to find you
for i fear the darkness, waiting behind you

hold on, thee princessa della luce
hold on in thy tower, thy prison of thorns

it will be soon
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Biggy » Sun Nov 16, 2014 12:09 am

soon i will face the tower

in the ancient field of flowers

soon i will hold up thee

one two three

for i saw it in my dream

a shattered heart, a shattered scene

coming back ... sneaking through, the sewers, the wastelands, the odd side ... coming back to me, coming back to YOU
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Sun Nov 16, 2014 6:55 am

Thanks for the new poems, Brookswindow, Innercinema, DarkEmpress and Biggy. :clap: So early to think to create poetry for me, so I will add a new one off this last one my next visit or off whatever other poem is posted last when I return. :cheers:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TinyRose » Sun Nov 23, 2014 7:39 pm

return to what u were before
return to me

return to what u did before
return to her
return to your love

return to your girl
your lost girl
your shiny girl
your shoe shine girl

in your innocent world
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby tropicalheatwave » Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:39 pm

^^ last word in the poem was you not return. but fuck it, i'll do both

you are here for a brief time on earth
make your life to be all that its worth
eventually there will come a time when you must depart
embrace everything, from your moments of joy, to a broken heart
for without pain and suffering, there is no understanding and compassion
and with understanding one can easily discover their true passion


world drifting further apart
greed and manipulation considered as smart
man dividing against other living things
destroying the connectedness and the beauty it brings
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TinyRose » Mon Nov 24, 2014 1:07 am

tropicalheatwave wrote:^^ last word in the poem was you not return. but fuck it, i'll do both

you are here for a brief time on earth
make your life to be all that its worth
eventually there will come a time when you must depart
embrace everything, from your moments of joy, to a broken heart
for without pain and suffering, there is no understanding and compassion
and with understanding one can easily discover their true passion


world drifting further apart
greed and manipulation considered as smart
man dividing against other living things
destroying the connectedness and the beauty it brings


yes. you are right ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Mon Nov 24, 2014 5:49 am

Bringing my beloved to a place,
Away from hardships and pain
For you I would smile,
For you, I would run a thousand miles!
I don't live to please,
To the people I hate with burning passion,
But for you, my beloved
I would sail the seven seas,
Bring back what has been gone
With a smile in my face
To see you in your joyful phase

Never mind the world,
Never mind the haters,
For you, I would live it all
I'll change my broken heart,
I'll change my broken ways,
Because for you, my beloved,
I would chase away my demons,
With new light shining down my face




So......
I tried making a romantic poem.........
..........How did it go?
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TinyRose » Mon Nov 24, 2014 8:26 am

Freya_Nightmist wrote:Bringing my beloved to a place,
Away from hardships and pain
For you I would smile,
For you, I would run a thousand miles!
I don't live to please,
To the people I hate with burning passion,
But for you, my beloved
I would sail the seven seas,
Bring back what has been gone
With a smile in my face
To see you in your joyful phase

Never mind the world,
Never mind the haters,
For you, I would live it all
I'll change my broken heart,
I'll change my broken ways,
Because for you, my beloved,
I would chase away my demons,
With new light shining down my face




So......
I tried making a romantic poem.........
..........How did it go?



it worked quite well . . . ;)

face 2 face
they stand and stare
into their eyes so wide
and so far as the ocean

shoulder 2 shoulder
they fight
fight away the dark
dark creatures creeping around
fight the shadows in the crowd

heart 2 heart
they embrace
way off shore
in the city of dreams
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby tropicalheatwave » Mon Nov 24, 2014 10:19 pm

dreams inspire us to create
they give us the motivation to become great
so move beyond your fears and dare to dream
even though it may seem like an arduous battle upstream
realizing your potential is worth the extreme
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TinyRose » Mon Nov 24, 2014 10:39 pm

extreme was the life i had
extreme were my dreams

then came the day, i was lucky
the day i saw the light

now my life is better than a dream
since that night . . .
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby spacejunkie » Wed Nov 26, 2014 7:15 pm

night is when i peel back my mask
feed my problems, throw back the flask
Night is when i don't pretend
i know who i am, i am my only friend.

Morning is when i lose myself in basic day to day life
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Juri » Thu Nov 27, 2014 9:02 am

spacejunkie wrote:night is when i peel back my mask
feed my problems, throw back the flask
Night is when i don't pretend
i know i am, i am my only friend.

Morning is when i lose myself in basic day to day life



nice !!!


life is all you have

one life

life is what you give to me

my love

o i love you with every beat of my restless heart ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TheMAXX » Tue Dec 02, 2014 5:14 am

Beautiful :) :) :balloons:

There are some good poets here. Obviously much better than me :(

Heart full of Ash
Heart full of Hope
Potatoe Mash
with crumbled Dope
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby plazaff » Tue Dec 23, 2014 2:41 pm

Dope to my brain is the way that I feel,
When I look in your eyes the time stands still,
Your like a drug shot spreading all into my veins,
Cause when I cant have you I'm going insane,
But all good things always come to an end,
Its time to let you go but forever we're friends. :dj:
He shall cover thee with his feathers,
and under his wings shalt thou trust: his truth shall be thy shield and buckler.

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby tropicalheatwave » Wed Dec 24, 2014 1:03 pm

friends are suppose to be there for you, even at your worst
cheer you up when you feel like your about to burst
a real friend isn't afraid to tell you what you really need to hear
they will push you to be your best and overcome fear
they are the voice that tells you to keep going when you're about to quit
they aren't afraid to tell you when your being stupid, even if you can't admit
i walk through life alone sometimes in need of a friend
but i can't say i've ever been one either...the end
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby UglyKidJoe » Sat Dec 27, 2014 11:55 am

end will never be reached...
since you brake me down every day
to build me up again

and i will take that pain
will take your pain
pain for pain

i will hold up thee
my queen...
my queen of the woods

for i love thee so,
for i love thee more than my life

my coloured soul
lost inside a thousand crystal layers of thoughts
deflection the outside ... deflecting my love

though i can see you there
i can FEEL you there

and i will stand
until the world falls
until the end

for you are my light, my love, my soul
my insanity, shall thee be the death of me

for you're the one that sings my hearts melody . . .


(for V.)



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here that was it all ... i cant do it any better ... i just cant ... FUCK

goodn8, sleep t8... i go to sleep for an hour ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby UglyKidJoe » Sat Dec 27, 2014 1:29 pm

I have said it all, for the first time in my life I have written better poetry than you Freya ... (I have written better than the best poet I ever read...) 20 poems today ... And I deleted them all

well... it is what it is ... ahahahah and it IS "insanity" goodn8 girls
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TheMAXX » Mon Dec 29, 2014 1:03 am

UglyKidJoe wrote:20 poems today ... And I deleted them all


Not really?? Why????
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Mon Dec 29, 2014 1:34 am

Nice new poems since my last visit. Thanks all. :clap:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Mon Dec 29, 2014 1:38 am

UglyKidJoe wrote:[i]end will never be reached...
since you brake me down every day
to build me up again

and i will take that pain
will take your pain
pain for pain

i will hold up thee
my queen...
my queen of the woods

for i love thee so,
for i love thee more than my life

my coloured soul
lost inside a thousand crystal layers of thoughts
deflection the outside ... deflecting my love

though i can see you there
i can FEEL you there

and i will stand
until the world falls
until the end

for you are my light, my love, my soul
my insanity, shall thee be the death of me

for you're the one that sings my hearts melody . . .


Melody of your love still plays inside my heart
Once you got in you stayed from the start.
You were transplanted for good
I wouldn't remove you no matter if I could.
Love lives on
We belong, there will be no so long!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby UglyKidJoe » Mon Dec 29, 2014 4:21 am

Melody of your love still plays inside my heart
Once you got in you stayed from the start.
You were transplanted for good
I wouldn't remove you no matter if I could.
Love lives on
We belong, there will be no so long!
:heartpump:


nooooooo :) not too much compliments for the old man... ah, well
i'll try...


ALSO to YOU :hugs: :hugs: a happy new year
I have now enough poetry here
So I can go out and got myself some beer
and don't YOU forget the red underwear !! (it is a tradition in Italy for Silvester/NewYears night... well, sono italiano... what should I do, everyone here IS SO ;))
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby UglyKidJoe » Mon Dec 29, 2014 4:37 am

TheMAXX wrote:
UglyKidJoe wrote:20 poems today ... And I deleted them all


Not really?? Why????



BECAUSE I just DID
because i am a kid
eating chocolate and
drinking hard, hard my music and hard
is my life, a poet's life comes at a cost
many envy us, yet we are all but lost

there is not much to envy 'bout me
just one thing, i love myself, and i am free
and i have one I will NEVER lose
I built her up myself, MAXX, and locked her deep
inside my shattered heart
she to be the one to RIP MY WORLD APART
my jungle queen
my KID
my LOVE
my DREAM

so i became her
after all these years
and she became my cutting bride

so i BECAME her, too
she's my place to hide

a tough girl, alone in the woods
snatches them wolves, red riding hood

I love you and I love your NAME
I love your light so bright, like fresh snow, so BRIGHT
and I cry out your sweet name, la Bianca Neve
for thy name is

SNOW WHITE


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soooooooooooooooo, the IDEAL time for some loud hardtrance, ain't it? I guess so... AND for buying some FIRECRACKERS :D :D :D
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:58 am

UglyKidJoe wrote:I have said it all, for the first time in my life I have written better poetry than you Freya ... (I have written better than the best poet I ever read...) 20 poems today ... And I deleted them all

well... it is what it is ... ahahahah and it IS "insanity" goodn8 girls

AHA
A challenge to make me go poetry mode, eh?
Well, challenge accepted!
I see it's "Snow white?"
No problemo

White
Is the color of my life
Lifeless and boring
Nothing to do but to eat, sleep and work
Is this the life I wanted?
To survive doing just that?

Friends,
All foreign to me
So fake and uncaring
childlish and unknowing
careless yet happy
And so I push away
To prevent any pain
All the things that I can gain
And keep to myself
No sharing
No complaints
For I only live on my own

But it's not so bad
Feeling glad
For the life I made
Away from "friends"
I don't mind others to go away!
But come what may!
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TheMAXX » Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:17 pm

may then you ........ the f*** LEAVE IT ....

like .... I DID ...
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Postby tropicalheatwave » Sun Jan 04, 2015 1:18 am

^^may you stop stress-in me
your ignorance is depress-in me
and don't think twice about test-in me
because i don't care if you think less of me
your not going to get the best of me
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Sun Jan 04, 2015 9:40 pm

TheMAXX wrote:may then you ........ the f*** LEAVE IT ....

like .... I DID ...

You are not making sense, out of the blue, did you make me fuse!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby darkanomoly » Fri Jan 30, 2015 9:35 pm

Lol i dont know if this is actually going to be a poem but here goes nothing. if it sucks well at least I tried

Me, I am me, the me that was is not me anymore,
I am the new me, the me that has no faith, no balief, the me that freewill, logic, reason and experimental thinking turned me into a heathen, a heretic, a warlock, most of the world hates and shuns.The light can blind me and endanger me so I avoid the light of religion,
I choose to see past the dark and into the truth despite how weird or odd it may seem to the religious or theists.
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Postby sentaru » Sun Feb 01, 2015 3:24 pm

darkanomoly wrote:Lol i dont know if this is actually going to be a poem but here goes nothing. if it sucks well at least I tried

Me, I am me, the me that was is not me anymore,
I am the new me, the me that has no faith, no balief, the me that freewill, logic, reason and experimental thinking turned me into a heathen, a heretic, a warlock, most of the world hates and shuns.The light can blind me and endanger me so I avoid the light of religion,
I choose to see past the dark and into the truth despite how weird or odd it may seem to the religious or theists.


Theists see heavens above and darkness below,
Science sees particles creating the snow,
Dreamers see stories they make in their head,
I see the living, the walking, and the dead.
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Postby jphill79 » Tue Feb 10, 2015 5:20 pm

dead, the night is dead
dark, the night is dark
cold, the night is cold
bright is the sun blinding me in the early morning.
I despise the morning,
now i must must return to the dead, dark, cold of the night found only in my dreams.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Sat Feb 21, 2015 12:22 am

Morning is the end
Of every dream
To stop us
From fleeing
In the world
Of reality
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby darkanomoly » Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:13 pm

Freya_Nightmist wrote:Morning is the end
Of every dream
To stop us
From fleeing
In the world
Of reality

Nice
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby analencounters » Wed Apr 08, 2015 1:38 pm

darkanomoly wrote:
Freya_Nightmist wrote:Morning is the end
Of every dream
To stop us
From fleeing
In the world
Of reality

Nice


Nice that wut they call us. We them black ass ballas.

Bitch I ain't nice I'm rude as fuck. Cum dawg let's keep it a buck.

Niceýyyy.. we so niceyyyy. Nicey boys... yeah nicey. Boys... ( sound of women having orgasms in the background )

Yee... that's an abbreviation. we educated niggas, ya'll get played like playstation. Unnhhhh...

N that's the niggas Yee we black ass niggas. I that's the is like yo mouth full oh jizz yeeee....

C thats for cummin, like you see me cummin, like ejaculate like your butt that's where I cum in. Yeeeahhhh...

E that's everywhere, like I'm cummin in the sky and in your hair unnnhhhh...

Yeahhhh.....

Niceýyyy.. we so niceyyyy. Nicey boys... yeah nicey. Boys... ( sound of women having orgasms in the background )

yeah we the nicey boys years all we do is cum. Yeah we came here to cum yeah all up in your bum yeah..

CUM

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:13 pm

Isn't that an interesting poem.

Off the last word - "cum" - huh? okay.

Cum in place of love
Filling an empty hole
..but never the whole of your emptiness.
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby eddie_jessup » Thu Apr 09, 2015 3:32 pm

emptiness... last drop... last call... my only friend, gone
emptiness... my thoughts... my bluray cases... my only love, gone
emptiness... the liquor store... the whiskey aisle... my only care, GONE! :dummy" :cheers:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby tropicalheatwave » Sun Apr 19, 2015 12:43 am

Emptiness inside us is what most seek to avoid facing
We fill it with artificial meaning, yet never embracing
From people to people we seek constant validation
Not realizing we are placing our own limitations
Perhaps our emptiness is what needs to be explored
It could be the door to the liberation we've never aimed toward
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby puppyjill » Sat May 16, 2015 6:03 am

Toward the door I walk
when I am alone
Toward the door I walk
Waiting an hopeing for my man to come home.

Toward the door I walk paceing an hopeing within
Toward the door I walk when he enters my day will begin
Resistance is futile, the world as we know is forever gone.
Fear not for a hero will arise.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby pisces_dreamer » Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:08 pm

Begin is the age on your skin
Begin is the Dawn of the day
Dead is the begin of life again
Life begins each and everyday
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Sheena » Wed Sep 16, 2015 4:56 pm

Everyday, everyday i have the blues.
Everyday, everyday i have the blues.
You see me worried, Baby,
'cause it's you i hate to lose.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby pisces_dreamer » Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:26 pm

Ok so I was writing to this track when I started messin around with the poems in here. I fit the first 9 poems in, excuse my terrible singing voice and poor quality, hope y'all like it


http://vocaroo.com/i/s0tZgjQIQe3h
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Sheena » Thu Sep 17, 2015 4:17 pm

AM radio.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby pisces_dreamer » Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:13 pm

Sheena wrote:AM radio.


Well ain't you a cold bitch lol don't worry it's not for you anyway
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Sheena » Fri Sep 18, 2015 4:19 pm

That whining over comment doesn't make the song any good.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby pisces_dreamer » Fri Sep 18, 2015 4:25 pm

Sheena wrote:That whining over comment doesn't make the song any good.


It doesn't? Damn I thought it would.
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Postby Sheena » Sun Sep 20, 2015 1:55 pm

Nice. Better. Makes for a smile.
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Postby pisces_dreamer » Sun Sep 20, 2015 3:05 pm

:cabbagepatch:
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