Gakuen Hetalia (school hetalia) Fanfiction

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Heres a story I started writing today.. its more a fanfict but.. Its still writing right?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9KTkkRCawY < The official Trailer for the Game for the PSP to be realeased on the 24th march 2011

heres the story:

Chapter 1

Arthur Kirkland, an 18 year old student from England, was grinning with sheer glee at his results, A* in his Literature examination. Though when he looked at the score board, he saw that the highest grade in the class didn't belong to him, but to the student in the year below him, Franziska. She had received 98% in her final mark.
The truth was, Arthur has had a Crush on the girl ever since she got moved into his class earlier last year. She was too smart for the year below so got moved up in attempt to make it harder for her, but she whizzed past everyone else in the class. She was taking Cookery Class, Literature and Art, she achieved exceptionally high in all of these classes, and she is a member of the international Tennis championships, come in the finals every year for 5 years.
But she never noticed Arthur, not once. He had kept a good eye on her all the time, even protecting her from other boys attempting to make a move on
her. Like his best friend, Alfred F. Jones, An American transfer student, who once asked Franziska on date.. but England grabbed him and beat him up before he got an answer.

"I can't believe an Idiot like you got an A* in Literature.." A familiar voice broke into Arthur’s thoughts.
"Ah, Katherine.. my darling cousin, why can't you be nice to me for once?" Arthur sighed at His younger cousin, Katherine Armstrong. She’s from Northern Ireland and she’s the best at sports and the second most feared female in the school, the first being Elizabeta Héderváry, a Hungarian student in the year

above Arthur. She has short dark brown hair, its almost a crew cut.. but not quite. Shes a bit smaller than Arthur and a year younger.. but twice as though

and manly.
"I, Katherine Armstrong, NEVER give compliments.. especially not to English wankers like you." Katherine stated before storming off. Byrne O’Hara, an Irish student and Katherine's best friend (slave), apologised before following his friend (master).
"Man, that girl gets more rude every time I see her.." Arthur muttered to himself. He turned round to leave when bam! He walked straight into someone!
"Oh my! I'm really very so-" Arthur Immidately started to apologize but.. when he saw who it was he stopped mid sentance. Franziska was sitting on the
floor where Arthur had knocked her over.
"Ah.. no its really ok.. it was my fault.." Franziska said, standing up quickly.
"a..are you hurt?" Arthur stammered.
"Haha, not really.. stings a little but its fine.. a little bit of pain doesn't hurt anyone, right Arthur?" Franziska laughed.
"you.. said my name?"
"Yes of course, Your in my class aren't you? why wouldn't I know your name?"
"ah its nothing!" Arthur turned and left quickly, his face felt hot and he was sure his face was pure red. Franziska has actually said his name.. she knew who he was! He felt ashamed and excited at the same time. He decided to go and hide in the Library for a bit.

He arrived at the library and went straight to the history section, because this had the highest bookshelf in the place and few people went in there for very long. He pretended to look at the many books, taking one out at random and flipping through it. When he reached the 'R' section, someone reached down in front of him, a thin slender arm with a hand, a feminine hand complete with purple nail polish and finely moisturised skin, pulled a book out titled 'The down fall of Soviet Russia'. when Arthur read the title, he flinched. He knew who the person beside him was.
"Looking for something in particular? I can help you.. I know this section well." Franziska's Russian ascent said.
"uuhh.. uh.. no. I'm just looking at the books..." Arthur stammered.
"Haha, thats weird. I didn't really see you as the history type anyway." Franziska laughed. Which is odd.. Franziska didn't really have many friends, apart from the grumpy Swiss student, Basch Zwingli and the snobbish Austrian, Roderich Edelstein. Neither of them are really the laughy type and are really serious. Franziska rarely spoke to other people in the class and rarely even smiled for that matter.
"You like history?" Arthur asked curiosity peaked inside him. he turned round and looked Franziska in the face. Franziska's grey-blue eyes twinkled at him like a winter twilight, her skin smooth and soft, not a spot in sight. A school scarf hung round her neck, resting on her chin. Her blondish brown hair was sitting neatly on her head, apart from a strand of hair which had a mind of its own.
"Yes, recently I've become quite fond of it.. why so curious all of a sudden?" Franziska smiled, closing her eyes to do so.
"Oh, I just didn't see you as the type to like History.." Arthur replied, bowing his head.
"I can't believe she’s talking to me.. I feel so.. wonderful.." Though Arthur
"Umm, Sempai?" Franziska asked nervously, "Is Alfred Jones.. American?" Arthur flinched at this question..
"she’s talking to me because she wants Alfred.. I knew it.." he thought. "Oh, uh yes he is." He replied smiling, trying to hide his disappointment.
"ah, My friend has a super crush on him. Haha! she asked me to find out." Franziska smiled at him happily.
"Lies. such a common liar.." Though Arthur bitterly
"Anyway Senpai.. I'll be over there at the table reading.. if you want to join me." Franziska winked at him. She moved off towards the centre of the library where there were tables for people to sit at and read or study. Arthur smirked at this and quickly set about looking for a book to read.

When Arthur had finally located a book that seemed mildly interesting, he headed towards where Franziska was. When he saw how many people were in there he gasped.
"There are a lot more people here compared to earlier.." He murmured. He looked around for Franziska, He found her quickly enough.. but she was talking to Alfred! Arthur went over quickly.
"Ohohohoho! Thats really how they fought!" Alfred laughed excitedly, "Hey, take a look at this! I have the body of an American hero right?" Alfred posed in a heroic and manly way, showing his muscles.
"Ahaha, yeah! Thats some body alright.." Franziska laughed along, "But I'm not really into that type of guy."
"Oh? what type of guy do you like then?" Alfred inquired.
"It's kind of embarrassing.. but I like effeminate men.. ones who can be dominated if you know what I mean.." Franziska blushed.
"oh.. well.. I can be dominated by you if you want.." Alfred said in a suggestive voice, wriggling his eyebrows.
"No thanks.. your not my type. Besides, you don't cook or knit or any of that stuff.." Franziska laughed Alfred which upset him a little. Arthur meanwhile imagined himself in his cooking attire, a pink apron with frills along the side... and the way he liked to sew on weekends.. But quickly shook his head violently to get the thought out of his head. This is when Franziska noticed him.
"Oh Arthur! Didn't see you there.. Sit!" She smiled at him, taping the seat beside her. Arthur blushed and sat down quickly, hiding his face with his hair.

"Yo Arthur!" Shouted Alfred.
"Shhhhh! this is a Library!" Hissed Franziska
"Oh.. sorry." Whispered Alfred.
"Hi Alfred." Said Arthur, as if he didn't care.
"Heyy, Franziska.." Alfred said in that suggestive tone again.
"what now?" Sighed Franziska wearily.
"Arthur is quite effeminate.. he cooks food wearing a frilly pink apron and he does needl-" Arthur punched Alfred in the head very hard, causing him to topple back. "Ow, man!"
"B-Be quiet!" Huffed Arthur. "What I do in my free time has nothing to do with you.. you.. IDIOT!" Arthur stormed out of the Library, face so red it looked like a Tomato.

“Wow.. I didn’t think he’d react like that..” Alfred said rubbing the back of his head.
“hehehahahaha! The way he reacted.. It was priceless!” Franziska was practically crying with joy. “He’s exactly what I’m looking for!”
“Well, what I said was true. He wears this silly pink apron with loads of frills when he’s cooking these disgusting and dry cake things.. Scones or something. And he does embroidery and collects different flavours of tea!” Alfred laughed.
“that’s.. cute!” Franziska blushed through pure laughter “Alfred.. You have to get him to hang around with me!” She grabbed Alfred’s blazer and pulled herself close to him. “Please Alfred.. I want to spend time with him… the look on his face.. Made me want to..” Alfred grabbed Franziska’s hand and said;
“I’ll get him to, don’t worry.. Not for a second.”


this is Arthur Kirkland (UK) -


This is Alfred F. Jones (USA) -



(If any names appear on here that you are unsure of, please visit http://hetalia.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Category:Characters to see what who I'm talking about. (The names are of the people named after their country of origin e.g. Arthur Kirkland is called England)

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Chapter 2

(Notes: Senpai is a Japanese honorific for Senior. Und is the way and is pronounced by Germans. I'm not sure if i'm saying Im Yong Soo's name correctly.. as i'm not really enlightened to Korean names.)

Roderich was getting really annoyed now. Franziska was 20 minutes late to their meeting and she’s the one who’s suppose to be representing the entire of the team. He glanced into the room, everyone was there.. Basch, Ludwig, Im Yong Soo and Gilbert.. But where is Franziska!?
“Still not here?” Ludwig asked, coming out of the room.
“No.. und she better hurry up!” Roderich was really annoyed, he wanted to bang his piano with a hammer.
“I don’t see what the problem is.. Though I kinda do want some of her free food!” Im Yong shouted.
“You be quiet! You should pay for her food sometimes, think of what would happen if she went bankrupt!” Basch shouted angrily at the Korean. “He’s so disrespectful!” He thought bitterly.
“Look lets just try und get along.” Ludwig said, seeing how angry Basch is.
“s-sorry I’m late!” Huffed Franziska, dashing up to them, hair a mess and her face bright red.
“where the hell have you been!?” Ludwig shouted “You were suppose to be here 25 minutes ago!”
“Sorry, Ludwig-senpai.. But I had to dash home to get this!” Franziska held up a thick black folder that had a label on the side saying ‘Sports planning’.
“you made it already..?” Ludwig asked, surprised.
“yeah.. Huff..” Franziska panted.
“uhhh, come inside and have some.. Uh.. Tea..” Ludwig muttered. His heart started to beat like crazy.. Franziska had done the entire file herself in 2 days. that’s a heck of a lot of planning and time.. She was amazing. Franziska helped herself to some of Roderich’s home made bitesize biscuits. She put one straight in her mouth, and dunked another into a glass of milk Im Yong had poured for her.

“Time to start the meeting!” Basch said, standing up moving towards a large blackboard, scooping up a white chalk. “we are going to be facing off some very though opponents this year, now that the Nordics have started to join in more.. Along with the Baltic’s and surrounding area!” He scribbled mindless pictures and phrases on the blackboard. “everyone here is expected to give 110%! Any slackers WILL be given a good hiding, no one and I mean NO ONE, is to slack off, got it!?”
“Umm.. Switzy.. Its not like we have any slackers here.. Except Im Yong.” Franziska pointed out.
“Be quiet!” Raged Basch. “Feliks Łukasiewicz has even joined in and everyone knows that this means!” he began slamming the chalk on the board again like some rabid animal. Everyone looked at each other.
“Basch, that’s enough.” Ludwig said, grabbing the Swiss man’s shoulders.
“No its not!” Basch retaliated, he was truly angry. Franziska sighed.
“You guys should stop pretending to be all manry.. Its unbecoming.” Franziska moaned, “If we just practice like we did last time everything will be okay! Me, Switzy and Roderich will work together and Ludwig, Feliciano and Im Yong can work as a team too.”
“great.. Give me the trouble why don’t you.” Complained Ludwig.
“Fine then.. Im Yong, Switzy and Roderich can work together and Me, Ludwig and Feliciano can work together. That way its fair! 2 hard workers and 1 slacker in each.. Da?” Franziska smiled. She had wanted to work with Ludwig from the get go.

Later, after the meeting, Franziska is ready to leave the school and go on home. When she bumps into Heracles Karpusi, A Greek student.
“Oh, hey, Heracles-Senpai, How have you been?” Franziska smiled at the older student. The pair are good friends, sharing the love of both cats and food, they often visit each others houses.
“Hey.. Are you heading home..? I .. fell asleep in the library..” Heracles yawned.
“Yeah, my sports team just had a meeting.” Franziska replied. “Want to walk with me?”
“Yes.. Do you want to.. Come to mine.. And have some.. Squid..?”
“Sounds good.. Its not like there’s anyone waiting for me at home anyway.”
So the pair set off home together.

More coming soon~

Ludwig (germany) -


Basch (switzerland)-


Roderich (austria)-


Feliciano (Italy)-


(Sorry but Im Yong Soo - Korea, doesn't have an official school photo, because he's 'offensive') -


Sorry again but Gilbert Beilschmidt (Prussia) Doesn't have an official uniform yet either.. so here his Noto-sama 6 uniform (note: His eyes are actually red)


Heracles Karpusi (Greece) -

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Important Notes:

There is no picture for Franziska, Katherine Armstrong or Byrne O'Hara because these are my characters, created BY ME, for me.. and I haven't drawn any pictures of them yet. Franziska represents Russia, Katherine Armstrong represents Northern Ireland and Byrne O'Hara represents The republic of Ireland (south Ireland)

Im Yong Soo's character is based on what I have heard/read about him, as he was removed from the anime because the Korean government though Im Yong to be offensive as he is a bit of a pervert, steals others ideas/creations and claims they are his own, his hanbok was drawn incorrectly and the way he speaks is wrong... well seems as how the whole anime is based off sterotypes.. isn't this well.. NORMAL!?

Greece Karpusi's character may be a little far-fetched and weird, because he's not a main character and rarely appears in the anime (and I haven't read the manga yet) so I'm just going on what I saw of him and Hetalia wiki's notes.

Franziska has my name because I didn't want to use my normal character, Himeji Zatlon because her name is Japanese and as my character is supose to be representing Russia, I thought it would be best. and because I couldn't be bothered to come up with anything else.

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will hopefully starts working on this again xx

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Important Notes:
"Franziska represents Russia,"

THIS IS WRONG! Franziska represents Cohdiophia, an area of Russia beside the 3 baltic states. it was an actual nation up until WW2 where it was destroyed along side Prussia for its impending threat. Cohdiophia was made up of Chinese, English and Russians. Thought it was a Russian country and very much part of the soviet union, it was also part of the Chinese empire and the UK. Disputes over its actual nationality still linger today. Tough Russia were the ones who decided the country should end and invaded it over night. It has strong connections to the German countries (Deutschland, Austria, Switzerland, Lichtenstein, Prussia, HRE etc), and even joined them In WW1. Prussia and Cohdiophia had an alliance for a very long time.