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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:13 pm

oh :D ok:p

ok in order to call on our spirit guides 8-) we'll have to tell them where to find our spirit
:alien: considering they're highly mobile and we have to sleep in our homes every night :D lol jk

so :geek: we need to journal a bunch of free writing http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_writing
to analyze the instincts we're predominantly expressing at this point in our life=> Then highlight key words to track the energy by law of association. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Law_of_association
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:20 pm

ok?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:32 pm

Well, "guide" means an archetypical mechanism that historically provided a defined output. So basically you are seeking a manuel to emulate a design. That is the purpose of a spirit guide and the nature of psychological alchemy.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alchemy

So in Order to learn the Control of a spirit you must find the knowledge to wield the power responsibly.. Meaning study it's affects.

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:18 pm

Soul, my precious test subject. :balloons: I will give you the shark interpretation tomarrow before bed. This time im applying technique rather than just a simple interp. :blockhead: :cupcake:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:41 pm

question:
how can you expect the spirit to guide you if ur controlling it?

ok, i will try to be on more
(DM is being retarded lately)
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:25 pm

You attune to it's vibrational frequency, then follow guidelines by Sigil magick, a technique of manifestation, to adequately transfer objectives to the processing power of the subconscious mind.
The spirits reside in the astral plane, you must use telepathy to communicate with them.

In order to exponent the emotive equation you will need to understand the nature of this Holographic Universe.

You will have to sincerely study all the associated material if you seriously want to succeed. This is why most people are weak and powerless. You're best off if you copy all ive written on this particular page, then paste it to a word document and translate the concepts using a dictionary and encyclopedia. I will help decipher to an extent. You must expand your horizons or fail. :apple:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:43 pm

no pressure *sweats*
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:43 pm

ok i think the cognitive disfunction between us is a definition of

Control: a standard of comparison in scientific experimentation.

The essential elements of a scientific method are operations, observations, models, and a utility function for evaluating models.
Operation - Some action done to the system being investigated
Observation - What happens when the operation is done to the system
Model - A fact, hypothesis, theory, or the phenomenon itself at a certain moment
Utility Function - A measure of the usefulness of the model to explain, predict, and control, and of the cost of use of it.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:47 pm

ok, i understand that much
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:33 pm

As we were discussing; photonic energy is the source of all life as we know it and thus we will use it to our advantage while tracking spirits.

Light is absolutely critical to all life that continues to evolve and grow on the surface of our planet, Earth. The Sun is the primary source of life sustaining energy at the core of our solar system nourishing all of creation and if we can learn to sungaze, we can attune to the highest aspects of our being and increase the radiance of our energy frequencies. This is a straight-forward yet effective method based on solar energy, which enables one to harmonize and recharge the body with life energy and also invoke the unlimited powers of the mind very easily. Additionally, it allows one to easily liberate from threefold sufferings of humanity such as mental illnesses, physical illnesses and spiritual ignorance.

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:34 am

true
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:18 pm

Good Day Soul,

As we were discussing Deep Blue Sea regarding your dream; I continually find evidence supporting the claim the subconscious mind data mines(extracting patterns from data) the astral plane constantly. (The game mindsweeper is a decent analogy.)

Would you like to consider it the trigger? If not I'll need you to intuit another lead.

These are notable points of reference with strong association:

> The most noticeable deficit is memory loss, which shows up as difficulty in remembering recently learned facts and inability to acquire new information. (This associates predominantly to believability factors I think.)
> Apathy can be observed at early stages, and remains the most persistent neuropsychiatric symptom throughout the course of the disease.
> Hyper-reactive dopamine reward system excerbates aggression attached to procuring object of desire.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:58 pm

i did have that dream after i saw the movie...
but it was interpreted differently by red...

are you daying i have a disease?
*confused about the explanation*
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:15 pm

no. Im using the disease to trace the biochemical/spiritual origins/dynamics and use as a manuel for deciphering. Def. want to hear what red said... ill be on yahoo.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:20 pm

ok, be there soon
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby BlackBerrySundae! on Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:36 pm

We need to get down the basic terminology so we're both using the same map key.

1. Serotonin - neurochemical for Alertness. High levels cause hyper-tension.

=> Serotonin is produced in Day Light and flourescent light. => In the dark it is converted to melotonin. =>

2. Melotonin - neurochemical for Memory Processing.

3. Innervation - the quality of connection between nerves.

Sympathetic denervation (which is basically the weakening and maladjustment - faulty or inadequate placement- of connections between nerves)
of the pineal ("Third Eye")
abolishes the rhythmic synthesis of melatonin and the light-dark control of its production.
http://www.endotext.org/neuroendo/neuroendo15/ch01s02.html


So in conclusion we see lack of organizational ability and consequential displacement/dissociation will have a snowball affect if left without reconsideration.

So yea, you were right; it's important we track that info about blue or whatever happened.
K, just wanted to explain the network so far, I'm working on finding more leads..
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:49 pm

makes sense so far
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby foxface on Tue Oct 05, 2010 3:59 pm

om goodness, all your poems are so deep and heartfelt. I want to get emailed too!!!

hahaha thanks for sharing soul void.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Sheena on Tue Oct 05, 2010 4:03 pm

Soul Void wrote:What Would YOU Do?

What would you do?
If you were alone
What would you do?
If you couldn’t go home
What would you do?
If nobody cared
What would you do?
For someone’s, bed, shared

Where would you go?
If you had no friends
Where would you go?
Before your life ends
Where would you go?
Before day turns night
Where would you go?
With restricted sight

What would you do?
With nothing to show
What would you do?
With nowhere to go
What would you do?
If, all by yourself
What would you do?
If no-one would help
Take out the 'What' lines and the rest are trite, not even metaphorical, poetic or beautiful. A nice structure tho. Put more work into it.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Oct 07, 2010 3:27 pm

foxface: thanks, but i havent written anything new in a while.
sheena: thanks for the critique. i realized they are a bit tedious, but my thoughts were somewhat tedious at the time, and i felt my poetry should reflect more than just my obvious feelings.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:28 pm

Not much spirit guidance here. I have ancestors who were blackfeet indians. You need to talk to the indians if you want to know about spirit guides. A person has to take a drug which causes halucinations though if they want to find their spirit guide. That's how the indians did it. I don't advise it though. In fact that's how Abraham and others saw God in the bible as well. Drugs are a no-no though. So are spirit guides. They could turn out to be demons. Wouldn't that be nice.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:04 am

Jesus.. And things. D:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:24 pm

Soul Void wrote:Doorway to Heaven

He came home from work
It had been a long day
He just wanted to sleep
With his wife he would lay

He opened the door
And there she stood waiting
But when he walked in
She saw he was shaking

“Baby, what’s wrong?”
She asked him with love
He replied that his friend
Had been shot from above

“A fight first broke out,
And then there was shouting
Then he fell to the pavement
And people were crowding

He was pushed off the roof
It all happened so fast
Now I hate myself for
What I said to him last

I cursed out his name
And then punched his side
He left disappointed
And later he died

I feel like a monster
For what I had said
I just want to say sorry
To my once loyal friend”

She saw he was hurting
From deep down inside
She knew what he didn’t
And tell him she tried

She told him what happened
Before his friend’s killing
“He called me this morning
To forgive he was willing

He asked me to tell you
For he ran out of time
And he wished he could see you
To tell you goodbye”

This news so surprised him
For he had thought for sure
That his friend would despise him
With a hate that was pure

But now that he knew
That he had been forgiven
He wondered about
The world they lived in

He knew that he had
To help out his friend
Protect his sad family
From a terrible end

He remembered the face
Of the horrible person
Who killed his old friend
He could not let things worsen

He knew where he lived
And went there to see
How they were doing,
His friend’s family

He got to the driveway
And saw the same truck
That he saw just before
The ground his friend struck

It belonged to the killer,
That horrible man
And knew after that
To hell he’d be banned

He kicked down the door
And guy turned around
He tackled the killer
And they fell to the ground

He held him down
With a blanket of fleece
While the horrified woman
Had to call the police

The cops soon arrived
And arrested the killer
He thought, “What a long day...”
It had been a thriller

He had earned his forgiveness
And paid back his friend
He saved this sweet family
From a dreadful end

He then returned home
And opened the door
Where his love was now waiting
To kiss him once more

As he opened the door
He opened his arms
And she rushed then to hold him
“I’m glad you weren’t harmed”

He was glad too
And now he could rest
While lying with her
He soon felt the best

He looked in her eyes
The comfort like heaven
He found several glimmers
And counted out seven

He held her so close
And kissed her with love
For there was nothing
He wanted above

They lay there in silence
With nothing to say
They kissed for a while
Then for hours they played

And when they were tired
They drifted to sleep
His arm then around her
He started to weep

Her head on his chest
She asked him, “What’s wrong?”
He said, “Nothing baby
You made me feel strong...”

They then fell asleep
And dreamt of clear weather
His dream showed that they’d
Always be together

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:08 pm

Soul Void wrote:yes... me and ladyminion... she is my soul mate...

..... :( And I'm what?









I like ur location, Steven.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Nov 25, 2010 9:23 am

I wrote that a LONG time ago, dizzy. Things have changed drastically since then...

And thanks, I like the location, too ;)
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:04 pm

By day I sing, of most everything. Tis early spring, as everywhere I do my thing. Then abruptly nature brings, a lousy wasp's sting. Now painfully I cling, as pain suddenly rings.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:49 pm

Now here I lay, wondering what to say. It's not that life's okay, I just forgot how to play. So in agony I always stay, rueing each day in every way.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:52 am

not bad, sheepdove
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:10 am

:yawn: So brother, how are you? Unfortunately the laptop appears completely buggered so a bit of a bitch to get online. D:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:50 am

Xwikki wrote::yawn: So brother, how are you? Unfortunately the laptop appears completely buggered so a bit of a bitch to get online. D:

Beautiful I'm dutiful. Irresponsible and illegitable. Absentmindedly mixing humanity. Showing nothing's glowing. Caged and enraged. Sadly performing badly.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:42 pm

When the pushing comes to shoving, I'll be hating, won't be loving. When the world's slowly dying, should we bother with the whying? I think it's too extreme, let's go to bed and have a dream.
"Sleeping is my leisure
Waking up in a minefield
Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Sun Nov 28, 2010 2:43 pm

Cay Lin wrote:When the pushing comes to shoving, I'll be hating, won't be loving. When the world's slowly dying, should we bother with the whying? I think it's too extreme, let's go to bed and have a dream.

Bravo. Bravo.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:11 am

Why, thank you. :D
"Sleeping is my leisure
Waking up in a minefield
Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:29 am

Too much rhyming gets unnerving, the last verse always in complete yearning. And utterly hurting, Jack falls down and plays his part. While Jill ends up with a broken..

:lol: Just wanted to play along. :P
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:03 pm

Xwikki wrote:Too much rhyming gets unnerving, the last verse always in complete yearning. And utterly hurting, Jack falls down and plays his part. While Jill ends up with a broken..

:lol: Just wanted to play along. :P

Well with sweetie pies, that's the way things lies.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Nov 30, 2010 1:29 pm

All these poems, though so entrancing, make me crave for more romancing, even as the starlight dancing turns it's head toward me in glancing. Ah, this hunger, never sated, gives rise to pain, unabated. do you think you could be persuaded, if my hair's so silky plaited, to take me out and make me dated?
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Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Tue Nov 30, 2010 1:49 pm

Cay Lin wrote:All these poems, though so entrancing, make me crave for more romancing, even as the starlight dancing turns it's head toward me in glancing. Ah, this hunger, never sated, gives rise to pain, unabated. do you think you could be persuaded, if my hair's so silky plaited, to take me out and make me dated?

Mam you're talking a pig in a polk. That isn't right for country folks. I've got one foot in the grave. So sweets I'm not allowed to crave. You need a sweet-tooth. I'm just a sourpuss foresooth.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:16 pm

By the way the british are smart, They made sex a art. They've got autosexed chicks, Now that's a nice trick. To tell males and females apart, Only the color-blind can't take to heart. As to Cochins, To them thy're not cochin.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:24 pm

I may be a dreamer, but I'm no fool. Love is and can be a very nice tool. Happiness is what it can bring, all wrapped up with ribbons and string.
One foot in the grave? How can we this trouble stave?
By the way, though I'm no schemer, are you another dizzy dreamer?
"Sleeping is my leisure
Waking up in a minefield
Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:43 pm

wow
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:47 pm

Cay Lin wrote:I may be a dreamer, but I'm no fool. Love is and can be a very nice tool. Happiness is what it can bring, all wrapped up with ribbons and string.
One foot in the grave? How can we this trouble stave?
By the way, though I'm no schemer, are you another dizzy dreamer?

I'm as ancient as the hills it seems. So all I can do is dream. Young-uns have all the fun. They stay constantly on the run. The sweetness they keep flowing. As their love they keep a-glowing.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:55 pm

Let my body kid you not, my soul is old enough to rot. But as the dawn begins a day, I cannot help a chance to play. Play is like free gold, and it is not my body that grows old. Love is both so brave and bold.
But, my dear, you neglect to answer, are you indeed the dizzy dancer? You act as though were she, now tell me honey, are you dizzy? XD.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:15 pm

Cay Lin wrote:Let my body kid you not, my soul is old enough to rot. But as the dawn begins a day, I cannot help a chance to play. Play is like free gold, and it is not my body that grows old. Love is both so brave and bold.
But, my dear, you neglect to answer, are you indeed the dizzy dancer? You act as though were she, now tell me honey, are you dizzy? XD.

I'm a guy and that's no lie. Dizzy but not no lizzie. Can't dance let alone prance. Can only dream of things that would make you scream. So much strife but that's life.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:44 pm

Cay Lin wrote:Let my body kid you not, my soul is old enough to rot. But as the dawn begins a day, I cannot help a chance to play. Play is like free gold, and it is not my body that grows old. Love is both so brave and bold.
But, my dear, you neglect to answer, are you indeed the dizzy dancer? You act as though were she, now tell me honey, are you dizzy? XD.

Why the hell is my name in this? :?
Can a heart broken so hard, so many times find some sort of resolve in one single person?
I've waited to long for Prince Charming to come for me but now I say: "Screw Prince Charming, I'll save myself!"
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:16 am

Sheepdove: I am sorry for the confusion, my sanity i'm surely losin'. Life is indeed hard and fast. What makes us humans think we'll last? Is it because we've lived through the past?

Dizzy: Just a case of who is who, but you know, it's nothing new. I thought that sheepdove might be you, but as it turns out, he's a dude.
"Sleeping is my leisure
Waking up in a minefield
Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sheepdove on Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:05 am

Cay Lin wrote:Sheepdove: I am sorry for the confusion, my sanity i'm surely losin'. Life is indeed hard and fast. What makes us humans think we'll last? Is it because we've lived through the past?

Dizzy: Just a case of who is who, but you know, it's nothing new. I thought that sheepdove might be you, but as it turns out, he's a dude.

I thought you were a girl. Wanting to go on a whirl. Now I'm totally confused. And a little bit amused. I don't mean to be rude. But you are a dude. As such give church a whirl. If you're looking for a girl.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:30 pm

sheepdove wrote:
Cay Lin wrote:Sheepdove: I am sorry for the confusion, my sanity i'm surely losin'. Life is indeed hard and fast. What makes us humans think we'll last? Is it because we've lived through the past?

Dizzy: Just a case of who is who, but you know, it's nothing new. I thought that sheepdove might be you, but as it turns out, he's a dude.

I thought you were a girl. Wanting to go on a whirl. Now I'm totally confused. And a little bit amused. I don't mean to be rude. But you are a dude. As such hive churdh a whirl. If you're looking for a girl.

You people are strange. On the verge of deranged. Sheep, I'm certainly a girl. No I don't want a whirl. Cay Lin I do see. That this is nothing new to you or me. (I'm running out of rhymes here!) I guess I just don't understand, but I know this. Sheepdove's a man. So I bid you adue. Tell me when there's something else to do.
Can a heart broken so hard, so many times find some sort of resolve in one single person?
I've waited to long for Prince Charming to come for me but now I say: "Screw Prince Charming, I'll save myself!"
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:00 pm

nice
A structure divided cannot stand... Is this so true of a heart?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:48 pm

Yes, yes, I am a girl, I'll let my female flag unfurl. But no, I'm not looking for a whirl. The earth whirls too fast as it is, and I've been swept away with just one kiss. Go to church to find "the one?" That would be good, but i'm not a church person. Not an atheist am I, but i don't care where I'll be once I die. No, no, that's a lie. But my beliefs differ from those provided, so I have myself decided.
"Sleeping is my leisure
Waking up in a minefield
Dream in just a pleasure dome
Love is a roulette wheel
Life is real."

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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Wed Dec 01, 2010 3:46 pm

interesting choice of words. (btw, nice avi.)
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