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a poem to my ex

Postby Danik on Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:57 pm

here is a poem, or more like a note to my ex.
I did write a poem that is a little more hateful in which i now do regret. :(

any way

I have cried for the first time
In a long time last night
It couldn't have hurt us that bad.
It just shouldn't have
I'm sorry for all that I had said
last night I couldn't go to bed
I had a lot of pain up in my head
the best way to say this is
I filled your heart with joy
then I pierced a hole into it
and then it drained everything out.
I wanted to fill it back up
but then you said some things
that I don't blame you for
and my heart shattered right after
I now look around and
there is nothing there to glue my heart back up
besides your love
I'm really sorry, I truly am
I want you to know that if there is any thin I can do for you I will be waiting
I sill love you,
Dan

no i don't really have a any stanzas or anything special patterns in the poem. none that I noticed anyways.
just want to put it up
Danik
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Re: a poem to my ex

Postby endebendel on Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:42 pm

Not a poem.
The remorse is touching.
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