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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:29 am

Soul Void wrote:cay and dizzy: you are both the perfect temperature, in my opinion. i've loved you both since our beginnin'. -hugs both- not to cold and not too hot. tho, hot, of course, can't say you're not. ;)

*pushes Steven slightly* Steven: If you wanna keep your hand, remove them now man. Cay: Then blind also am I, for you also are kind in my eye.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:12 pm

Thank you Dizzy. :D Steven is silly isn't he?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:17 pm

You are welcome Cay Lin, and my name's Eve, not Dizzy. Speak of the devil, where is he? :?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Mon Dec 20, 2010 3:15 am

Fine then, I'll call you Eve. And I must second that, "Where the hell is Steve?"
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:28 pm

I do not know where yonder Soul went. May I stop rhyming, for I am spent.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:50 pm

Of course you can't, rhyming's the game! Plain old prose is no claim to fame. :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:53 pm

Then I am out, I'm sorry to say. But rhyming is not the way I want fame. :wave:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:41 pm

Meh, I'm out too. Which way do YOU want fame?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:39 pm

Singing! :whistling: :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Dec 21, 2010 5:27 pm

That would be rhyming, darling. XD
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Wed Dec 22, 2010 8:28 am

eve: she has a point, there :lol:
cay: i was out at a friend's house the other day. (and please dont call me "steve". there is an "n" at the end of my name for a reason. i hate the name "steve".)
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Wed Dec 22, 2010 9:26 am

Cay and Steven: *sticks my tounge out at both of you* But it's not a trivial as rhyming for fun!!!
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Thu Dec 23, 2010 2:14 pm

Hey Eve, what's with the title change? ^^
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:37 pm

*shrugs* Just a little misunderstanding with Webby, but I don't mind. :D I like it really.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:58 pm

Hey Eve.. SLEEENNNDDERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MAAAAAANNN WAAATTCCHHHHHHHHESSS YOUUUUU MASTTUUURBBBBBAAATTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Thu Dec 23, 2010 5:03 pm

:shock: O.o WTF?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Thu Dec 23, 2010 5:22 pm

His name is Slender Man. And Masky watches you sleep, while Slender Man travels through cameras, and all things circle. Slender Man has no face, and made Alex and Brian disappear.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Thu Dec 23, 2010 5:27 pm

Okaaaaaaaaaay? I think you're a little crazy. :dummy"
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:17 pm

eve: -sticks out tongue- lol silly
vikki: stop scaring the tenshi :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:18 pm

Dizzydreamer wrote:Okaaaaaaaaaay? I think you're a little crazy. :dummy"


only a little? try totally off her rocker :D -grins at having pushed vikki off the rocker- muhahaha
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:21 pm

Soul Void wrote:eve: -sticks out tongue- lol silly
vikki: stop scaring the tenshi :D

I regret teaching u that word some days...
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Dizzydreamer wrote:Okaaaaaaaaaay? I think you're a little crazy. :dummy"


only a little? try totally off her rocker :D -grins at having pushed vikki off the rocker- muhahaha

-smakes steven upside his head- Meany! Pick Vikki back up!
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:24 pm

why? :?

-sighs and hangs head- fiiiinnee -helps vikki back onto her rocker and starts the rocking- if she falls again its not my fault :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:28 pm

Soul Void wrote:why? :?

-sighs and hangs head- fiiiinnee -helps vikki back onto her rocker and starts the rocking- if she falls again its not my fault :D

You use it in almost every conversation we have!
-rolls eyes- no it'll be hers because she's soo clumsy! :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:30 pm

because there are few words that can come close to describing your awesomeness and tenshi is one of them! :D

lol true dat! :lol:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:33 pm

I can't dis her too much she's my crazy British sister! And a FB buddy! :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:41 pm

she is my sister too, dear. and dont worry, she can hold her own in a dissing match :D she's a tough lil brit :lol:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:45 pm

Ya think? :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:47 pm

oh yea XD
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Dec 28, 2010 8:07 am

Steven: I only said Steve because it rhymed. :P

Vikki: GASP! So Slender Man is in my closet watching me masturbate!? GAAAAHHHH!
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Tue Dec 28, 2010 8:24 am

why does that jerk get to be so close to cay? even if he is being a creeper, he's closer to cay than we are :(
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Dizzydreamer on Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:30 am

Steven: I think Vikki's being a dolt, love.
Vikki: Don't scare Cay cay like that! If she has a heartattack, I'm going to England and kicking your British butt! :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:18 pm

Steven: Maybe in life, but not in heart. :D

Vikki: Take your Slender Man out of my closet. He's trying on my clothes... :shock:

Dizzy: Let's just say he's not watching me masturbate anymore... XD
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:10 pm

Bacccckkkkk! I heard the word masturbate and happened to drop b-I mean, ANYWAY. Hey, who's gonna kick my ass? I may be well spoken and short, but I am a grumpy little smart ass at times. :D I tend to give people a warning before I get violent, anyway.

How much does this suck? A 13 year old is taller than me. Sob. :lol:

Plus, Cays, I am sorry I did not reply to your email about Z. I completely forgot, opened it up when my friend was round and was going to reply to it later and found it in my email the other day. :lol:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:13 pm

Soul Void wrote:
Dizzydreamer wrote:Okaaaaaaaaaay? I think you're a little crazy. :dummy"


only a little? try totally off her rocker :D -grins at having pushed vikki off the rocker- muhahaha


:blowingkisses: Well, I am gloriously old fashioned and favour characters with such fashion sense as vampire bunny slippers; read too much and write emo poetry. Can't help it if I'm off my rocker, least I'm creative about it. :D
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:32 am

Xwikki wrote:Bacccckkkkk! I heard the word masturbate and happened to drop b-I mean, ANYWAY. Hey, who's gonna kick my ass? I may be well spoken and short, but I am a grumpy little smart ass at times. :D I tend to give people a warning before I get violent, anyway.

How much does this suck? A 13 year old is taller than me. Sob. :lol:

Plus, Cays, I am sorry I did not reply to your email about Z. I completely forgot, opened it up when my friend was round and was going to reply to it later and found it in my email the other day. :lol:

XD You are silly, V-Dawg. :D You WANT us to kick your ass? XD I wouldn't dream of kicking your British ass. Besides, I don't think my foot can reach across an ocean... :lol:

Aww. :( Well, a 12 year old is taller than ME, so it's okay.

That's okay. :D Isn't he cute, though!? :lol:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:32 am

I don't know, I'm not sure you lot could kick my ass if you tried. BRRINGGG IT. :lol: Actually, I'm a pussy when it comes to fighting.
Haha, he does look young for 16. I can't help but think about his owners and giggle at the thought of the possibility of coming across him one day, thank God you live in another country. Couldn't keep a straight face. :rofl: As cute as he is, I am more so the long haired metal hippie type. :lovestruck:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:48 am

Dizzydreamer wrote:Steven: I think Vikki's being a dolt, love.
Vikki: Don't scare Cay cay like that! If she has a heartattack, I'm going to England and kicking your British butt! :D


lol she can be at times.
Hey, if you're goin over there, I'm comin with you. Lets make it a party :D

Cay Lin wrote:Steven: Maybe in life, but not in heart.
Vikki: Take your Slender Man out of my closet. He's trying on my clothes... :shock:
Dizzy: Let's just say he's not watching me masturbate anymore... XD


That's a relief :D
lol slenderman the crossdresser :rofl:
then what IS he watching you do? :?
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Cay Lin on Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:35 pm

Vikki: I fight a lot. But mainly with my large vocabulary. :lol: I don't actually hit unless I have to.
You WILL meet him one day, because I will make you meet him. And we will giggle together. And then he'll think we have something wrong with us, which we do. :rofl: I like long hair, too. :D Hence my obsession with the younger Freddie Mercury. :lovestruck:

Steven: Yes, Slender Man is a crossdresser. :D He's not watching me do anything. :rofl: And now my mum knows about him:

Mom: "This smells strange..."
Me: "Like caramel, right?"
Mom: "No, like bad things. It reminds me of bad things."
Me: "Oh, like when Slender Man watched you masturbate?"
Mom: "WHAT!?"
Me: *dies laughing*

:rofl:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Soul Void on Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:54 pm

Damn, cay haha if you were aiming to surprise her, i can guarantee you succeeded :rofl:
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:02 pm

Slender Man doesn't have a face.. I don't think he's watching you do anything. ;)
Oh dear, make me meet him? My memory is very good and I tend to blame my Englishness for my bluntness, sarcasm and witt far too often. :P I couldn't help cracking a few comments..
Ice cream? :icecream: :P
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sweetshar on Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:23 am

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No need to copy your way of living and paste it to mine.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby glynich on Wed Mar 14, 2012 3:25 am

The Anatomy of Kiss

Its starts with a breath, air filling up your chest,

Oxygen transferred through the blood,

On highways moving around capillaries, veins, and arteries,

A web way branching through every part of me,

Moving life, carried on the backs of tiny cells,

Produced deep inside the marrow of your bones,

All these things working to keep your body alive,

In perfect timing, always perfect, with a lions heart,

Beating in that chest, pushing all the power of,

Those breathes around this machine, of life.

Now what happens, when I see you,

That long deep breath filling my chest,

Becomes sudden gasps, leaving a silly rasp,

Making my heart work double times,

Flushing my body with oxygen, grid locking the highway,

Of Veins, capillaries, and arteries, flushed with anxiety,

Perspiration, and fixation, becomes my body’s occupation,

My heart pumping so fast, it feels like jumping out of my chest,

I do my best despite the sweat, to vet the effect, of your hand,

Placed on my face, Muscles in my chin and jaw contract,

Pulling back making a smile, which take more of those little cells,

Feeding the machine of a smiling me.

The factory in overdrive, when I pull you by my side,

Muscles flexed when I brig you to my chest,

A lifting motion, with biceps triceps, back, and chest,

As I bring you to my Lips, oh long strong powerful,

Kiss and the machine, Lets out steam,

Release from the kiss, and all the muscles, oxygen, blood in me,

Begs for the same thing so the process is started over, as I bring you,

Closer for one more cycle, with a smile and a wonderful kiss,

Thanks to the breath taken in, to let it begin again.
"the only dreams that matter are the ones you have when your awake."
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby DreamNerd on Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:05 pm

I thought it was amazing! It defiantly stood out. I find a lot of poems a bit to cheesy, but this is just perfect.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby glynich on Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:35 pm

:) thank you....yeah the poem is perfectly reiterate.....
"the only dreams that matter are the ones you have when your awake."
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby Xwikki on Fri Mar 16, 2012 6:53 am

Xwikki wrote:I don't know, I'm not sure you lot could kick my ass if you tried. BRRINGGG IT. :lol: Actually, I'm a pussy when it comes to fighting.
Haha, he does look young for 16. I can't help but think about his owners and giggle at the thought of the possibility of coming across him one day, thank God you live in another country. Couldn't keep a straight face. :rofl: As cute as he is, I am more so the long haired metal hippie type. :lovestruck:

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eyes searching the night.
Forgive me, I'm a dreamer.
-Cay Lin.

"Pooh!" he whispered.
"Yes, Piglet?"
"Nothing," said Piglet, taking Pooh's paw. "I just wanted to be sure of you."
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sweetshar on Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:58 pm

Apologizing doesn't always mean
that your wrong and the other is right.
Sometimes it only means
You just really value the person much,
More than your pride.
No need to copy your way of living and paste it to mine.
I'm exactly not the perfect one but i could be that lucky still, by the way of who i am.
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Re: One of my more... interesting... poems...

Postby sweetshar on Fri Jan 25, 2013 2:58 am

Soul Void wrote:Dreaming Awake

He fell like a stone
Falling through water
He could not be saved
Nobody would bother

He was recently pushed
Off of the ledge
That kept him awake
Away from the edge

He plunged into darkness
And soon couldn’t see
But he would find light
Eventually

An angel then saved him
For he had saved her first
This feeling would fill him
Until he could burst

This love that he gained
Would serve as a hand
To save him from darkness
Help him understand

What he had to lose
From drowning in oceans
He drank her elixir
This potion of potions

And once he had finished
He felt so much better
His love brought him up
From the dark, damp, and wetter

He held her so closely
And would not let go
Then whispered to her,
“I love you, you know.”

She then pulled him closer
They lay on the bed
And several months later
They were to be wed

On the day of the wedding
To his chamber she snuck
She wanted to see him
Regardless of luck

One hour later
He gave her the ring
The “I do’s” were said
And they were kissing

They knew that they would
Always be together
Their love would live on
Forever and ever

They grew old together
And one day they knew
One would be taken
What would they do?

One day she got sick
She was not gonna make it
So he had to do something
For he could not take it

He kissed her a while
One hand on her heart
He then stole her pain
And tore it apart

She awoke the next morning
And he was not there
She wandered the house
But only found air

She then was confused
She sought out her lover
And later that day
She found him above her

He sat on a branch
High up in a tree
When he spotted his angel
He jumped down with glee

“What happened last night?”
She asked him with fright
“I thought i was dieing,
How am I alright?”

He smiled and said,
“Take my hand and I’ll show you.”
She followed instruction
His eyes glowing blue

“Look into my eyes.”
He said with precision
She stared in their centers
And was given a vision

She saw herself dieing
In the bed just before
He kissed her with love
Then held her some more

His hand on her heart
She watched as it glowed
The whole room turned blue
While time had then slowed

She watched as he healed her
Her eyes open wide
And after he finished
He lay by her side

He then felt the pain
But wouldn’t for long
He used his love for her
To keep himself strong

His hands making signals
Much too fast to see
His pain was then transferred
Outside to the tree

Where he had been waiting
For her to awaken
He had tricked fate
Nobody was taken

When the vision was over
She looked so surprised
She had never thought
Pain could be vaporized

He looked at her gladly
And said with a smile,
“I have something to show you,
Will you come for a while?”

She nodded her head
Then climbed on his back
She had found the strength
She recently lacked

He made his way higher
To the top of the tree
She shivered and asked,
“Where are you taking me?”

He held her so close
So she wouldn’t fall
He thought that she would
Like to see it all

When they reached the top
She opened her eyes
But could not look down
For heights she despised

He said with a smile,
“I will not let go.”
But she could not stop shaking
For how could she know?

She stared in his eyes
As not to look down
And saw he was calm
So she could not frown

She knew he was right
She trusted the man
They sat on the branch
They were holding hands

They looked up and smiled
As they stared at the moon
It looked so strange
Like a yellow balloon

The stars were so small
Like freckles in space
Spots on a canvas
That can’t be erased

They sat there all night
Until the sunrise
Until neither of them
Could open their eyes

Then came a ringing
The alarm by the bed
It all was a dream
In her beautiful head

She opened her eyes
And looked at the ceiling
The dream was so awesome
It seemed so appealing

The rest of the day
She stared at the sky
She thought of her lover
Wondering why

She had such a dream
And could not complain
She wasn’t sure why
This wasn’t insane

To stare at the moon
And all of the stars
She then said, “Our love
Will always be ours.”

She called him that night
And told him the dream
He told her, “It sounds
As cool as it seems.”

She said that she loved him
He returned the feeling
They agreed that this “dream”
Was very appealing

He told her that this
Was not just a dream
It had really happened
But it felt as it seemed

She knew what he meant
And then she felt happy
She then realized
She no longer felt crappy

Her hurting was gone
Gone with the wind
She enjoyed all this time
With her lover she’d spend

And then she had questioned
How it could be true
“I thought that you couldn’t,
So then how did you?”

He explained that he fixed
The problem she spoke of
So they could go anywhere
Above or below

The places they lived in
But couldn’t call home
They could now be together
And never alone

They then held each other
And lovingly kissed
They enjoyed the love
For a while they missed

And knew they would never
Miss it again
They knew that forever
Was time they would spend

Together forever
They promised each other
Especially since she
Would soon be a mother


this€ i€s great.. :) so inspiring
No need to copy your way of living and paste it to mine.
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