One of my more... interesting... poems...

[Soul Void]

Daydream
His concentration
Was lost in the wind
Daydreaming of moments
With his lover he’d spend

He remembered his dreams
And wished they were real
He knew he would someday
Show her how it feels

To fall asleep happy
Carefree and with ease
And to never succumb
To pain and disease

He finally found it
What he always wished for
He found his love waiting
For him past the door

He said that he loved her
As always he had
His love would not falter
He could not get mad

She knew in her heart
He meant what he said
And that made it easy
To sleep in her bed

He would soon join her
And hold her forever
Then her burden was lighter
As light as a feather

And as they lay peaceful
They wished to continue
This moment forever
No pain on the menu

They wanted to stay there
Her head on his chest
He told her this feeling
Was close to the best

Only two things were better
Then she asked what they were
He looked in her pupils
His voice then went firm

“Kissing you, angel”
He said with a grin
She giggled and asked him
What his best one had been

“Our bodies together
Both naked and calm
And lovingly kissing
Your cheeks in my palms

I gave you my soul
In return for your heart
And I promise you one thing
We will not stay apart

For we will be together
One way or another
And someday I will be
Your very best lover”

[Cay Lin]

i like this! very cool!! good job!

[xcape00]

I love poetry, this is very good. And interesting, what motivated you to write that? I love to write poetry too, I will have to post some of mine

[Soul Void]

i like this! very cool!! good job!

thanks, i try to make my work stand out, but its all from the heart - mine or others', it depends on the topic...

[Soul Void]

I love poetry, this is very good. And interesting, what motivated you to write that? I love to write poetry too, I will have to post some of mine

believe it or not, most of my work in the past 3 months - which is about all i've done - was based on my relationship with my girlfriend... and its all from the heart... so take from it what you will, and i hope people can learn from my experiences... I sure as hell did...

[SolderLover]

Its truly amazing!!!! I write poems myself but this describes what I want from a man. Very touching and moving. I hope to see more of your poetry.

[Soul Void]

i could email you what i have if you want

[SolderLover]

i could email you what i have if you want

If you don't mind private messaging me on this board I would gladly read what you have written so far.

[Cay Lin]

i could email you what i have if you want

If you don't mind private messaging me on this board I would gladly read what you have written so far.

His poems are amazing!!!

[Soul Void]

aw... *blushes* thanks... ill send it to you soon

[SolderLover]

His poems are amazing!!!

Yes they truly are.

[Soul Void]

thanks... glad you think so... its just how i write...

[Cay Lin]

thanks... glad you think so... its just how i write...

You write beautifully!

[Soul Void]

why, thank you

[Cay Lin]

why, thank you

Well, it's true!!!

[Soul Void]

i always try to stand out from a crowd... i couldnt stand writing any other way...

[Cay Lin]

i always try to stand out from a crowd... i couldnt stand writing any other way...

I hear ya!! I can't stand being like other people, that's why i write in the tanka form. people look at it and go, "what the hell?!" and i smile inside, knowing i have confused someone with my differences!!! Yeah, i'm a little crazy!

[Soul Void]

i know what you mean i do the same thing with everything else i do, but my poetry seems to draw them in... its odd...

[Cay Lin]

i know what you mean i do the same thing with everything else i do, but my poetry seems to draw them in... its odd...

'tis. i think it's cuz ur a guy and you write poetry. i don't mean to be sexist, but people think guys are so insensitive and stuff, so it fascinates people that men have a quiet, artistic side. at least that's what i think it is/

[Soul Void]

that could be it...

[Cay Lin]

that could be it...

Could be.

[Soul Void]

yea... so... RAWR!!!

[Cay Lin]

EEEK!!! A TIGER!!!

[Soul Void]

haha

[Cay Lin]

haha

i was ascared!!! you shouldn't laugh at me when i'm ascared!!! it isn't nice.

[Soul Void]

i sowwy...

[Cay Lin]

dat's otay!!!

[Soul Void]

Dreaming Awake

He fell like a stone
Falling through water
He could not be saved
Nobody would bother

He was recently pushed
Off of the ledge
That kept him awake
Away from the edge

He plunged into darkness
And soon couldn’t see
But he would find light
Eventually

An angel then saved him
For he had saved her first
This feeling would fill him
Until he could burst

This love that he gained
Would serve as a hand
To save him from darkness
Help him understand

What he had to lose
From drowning in oceans
He drank her elixir
This potion of potions

And once he had finished
He felt so much better
His love brought him up
From the dark, damp, and wetter

He held her so closely
And would not let go
Then whispered to her,
“I love you, you know.”

She then pulled him closer
They lay on the bed
And several months later
They were to be wed

On the day of the wedding
To his chamber she snuck
She wanted to see him
Regardless of luck

One hour later
He gave her the ring
The “I do’s” were said
And they were kissing

They knew that they would
Always be together
Their love would live on
Forever and ever

They grew old together
And one day they knew
One would be taken
What would they do?

One day she got sick
She was not gonna make it
So he had to do something
For he could not take it

He kissed her a while
One hand on her heart
He then stole her pain
And tore it apart

She awoke the next morning
And he was not there
She wandered the house
But only found air

She then was confused
She sought out her lover
And later that day
She found him above her

He sat on a branch
High up in a tree
When he spotted his angel
He jumped down with glee

“What happened last night?”
She asked him with fright
“I thought i was dieing,
How am I alright?”

He smiled and said,
“Take my hand and I’ll show you.”
She followed instruction
His eyes glowing blue

“Look into my eyes.”
He said with precision
She stared in their centers
And was given a vision

She saw herself dieing
In the bed just before
He kissed her with love
Then held her some more

His hand on her heart
She watched as it glowed
The whole room turned blue
While time had then slowed

She watched as he healed her
Her eyes open wide
And after he finished
He lay by her side

He then felt the pain
But wouldn’t for long
He used his love for her
To keep himself strong

His hands making signals
Much too fast to see
His pain was then transferred
Outside to the tree

Where he had been waiting
For her to awaken
He had tricked fate
Nobody was taken

When the vision was over
She looked so surprised
She had never thought
Pain could be vaporized

He looked at her gladly
And said with a smile,
“I have something to show you,
Will you come for a while?”

She nodded her head
Then climbed on his back
She had found the strength
She recently lacked

He made his way higher
To the top of the tree
She shivered and asked,
“Where are you taking me?”

He held her so close
So she wouldn’t fall
He thought that she would
Like to see it all

When they reached the top
She opened her eyes
But could not look down
For heights she despised

He said with a smile,
“I will not let go.”
But she could not stop shaking
For how could she know?

She stared in his eyes
As not to look down
And saw he was calm
So she could not frown

She knew he was right
She trusted the man
They sat on the branch
They were holding hands

They looked up and smiled
As they stared at the moon
It looked so strange
Like a yellow balloon

The stars were so small
Like freckles in space
Spots on a canvas
That can’t be erased

They sat there all night
Until the sunrise
Until neither of them
Could open their eyes

Then came a ringing
The alarm by the bed
It all was a dream
In her beautiful head

She opened her eyes
And looked at the ceiling
The dream was so awesome
It seemed so appealing

The rest of the day
She stared at the sky
She thought of her lover
Wondering why

She had such a dream
And could not complain
She wasn’t sure why
This wasn’t insane

To stare at the moon
And all of the stars
She then said, “Our love
Will always be ours.”

She called him that night
And told him the dream
He told her, “It sounds
As cool as it seems.”

She said that she loved him
He returned the feeling
They agreed that this “dream”
Was very appealing

He told her that this
Was not just a dream
It had really happened
But it felt as it seemed

She knew what he meant
And then she felt happy
She then realized
She no longer felt crappy

Her hurting was gone
Gone with the wind
She enjoyed all this time
With her lover she’d spend

And then she had questioned
How it could be true
“I thought that you couldn’t,
So then how did you?”

He explained that he fixed
The problem she spoke of
So they could go anywhere
Above or below

The places they lived in
But couldn’t call home
They could now be together
And never alone

They then held each other
And lovingly kissed
They enjoyed the love
For a while they missed

And knew they would never
Miss it again
They knew that forever
Was time they would spend

Together forever
They promised each other
Especially since she
Would soon be a mother

[Cay Lin]

Beautiful, Soulvoid!! you're writing reminds me of Dr. Seuss for some reason, but much, much deeper, and more passionate. maybe because you are both literary genius's!

[Soul Void]

if i feel strongly enough about something, i write about it... i might be good, but i wouldnt say genious...

[Cay Lin]

if i feel strongly enough about something, i write about it... i might be good, but i wouldnt say genious...

you're just being modest!

[Soul Void]

if you say so

[Soul Void]

Doorway to Heaven

He came home from work
It had been a long day
He just wanted to sleep
With his wife he would lay

He opened the door
And there she stood waiting
But when he walked in
She saw he was shaking

“Baby, what’s wrong?”
She asked him with love
He replied that his friend
Had been shot from above

“A fight first broke out,
And then there was shouting
Then he fell to the pavement
And people were crowding

He was pushed off the roof
It all happened so fast
Now I hate myself for
What I said to him last

I cursed out his name
And then punched his side
He left disappointed
And later he died

I feel like a monster
For what I had said
I just want to say sorry
To my once loyal friend”

She saw he was hurting
From deep down inside
She knew what he didn’t
And tell him she tried

She told him what happened
Before his friend’s killing
“He called me this morning
To forgive he was willing

He asked me to tell you
For he ran out of time
And he wished he could see you
To tell you goodbye”

This news so surprised him
For he had thought for sure
That his friend would despise him
With a hate that was pure

But now that he knew
That he had been forgiven
He wondered about
The world they lived in

He knew that he had
To help out his friend
Protect his sad family
From a terrible end

He remembered the face
Of the horrible person
Who killed his old friend
He could not let things worsen

He knew where he lived
And went there to see
How they were doing,
His friend’s family

He got to the driveway
And saw the same truck
That he saw just before
The ground his friend struck

It belonged to the killer,
That horrible man
And knew after that
To hell he’d be banned

He kicked down the door
And guy turned around
He tackled the killer
And they fell to the ground

He held him down
With a blanket of fleece
While the horrified woman
Had to call the police

The cops soon arrived
And arrested the killer
He thought, “What a long day...”
It had been a thriller

He had earned his forgiveness
And paid back his friend
He saved this sweet family
From a dreadful end

He then returned home
And opened the door
Where his love was now waiting
To kiss him once more

As he opened the door
He opened his arms
And she rushed then to hold him
“I’m glad you weren’t harmed”

He was glad too
And now he could rest
While lying with her
He soon felt the best

He looked in her eyes
The comfort like heaven
He found several glimmers
And counted out seven

He held her so close
And kissed her with love
For there was nothing
He wanted above

They lay there in silence
With nothing to say
They kissed for a while
Then for hours they played

And when they were tired
They drifted to sleep
His arm then around her
He started to weep

Her head on his chest
She asked him, “What’s wrong?”
He said, “Nothing baby
You made me feel strong...”

They then fell asleep
And dreamt of clear weather
His dream showed that they’d
Always be together

[Cay Lin]

the first time i read this, when you emailed it to me, it made me cry because i know how he would have felt. I get mad at my friends a lot, and if one of them died while i was mad, i wouldn't have been able to forgive myself. this is beautiful!

[Xwikki]

Why don't I get emailed>? It's beautiful.

[Cay Lin]

Why don't I get emailed>? It's beautiful.

hey, Vikki, come join me on DeviantART! i have a new avatar, and a new literature thingie. it is really cool!

[Xwikki]

Oh>! For sure, I'll try although devart is spacking up my laptop lately.

[Cay Lin]

Oh>! For sure, I'll try although devart is spacking up my laptop lately.

oh. okay!

[Soul Void]

i sowwy vikki... i email it to you if you want, just send me your email address and ill send you the poems

[Xwikki]

Squee. I dumped a poem in the litterature section a few hours ago. Okie. AND YES YOU SHOULD BE SORRY>!!! Jokes.
Vikki_Jolliffe@hotmail.co.uk

[Soul Void]

Squee. I dumped a poem in the litterature section a few hours ago. Okie. AND YES YOU SHOULD BE SORRY>!!! Jokes.
Vikki_Jolliffe@hotmail.co.uk

i is sending it now

[Xwikki]

I HAS AN EMAIL>!!!

[Soul Void]

yup yup

[Xwikki]

Ah>! Damn you with your attaching files and your able mind>!!! It takes me ages to work out how to accept them. XD

[Soul Void]

sorry, but you didnt pres the easy button

[Xwikki]

Easy button>?

[Soul Void]

its a staples commercial thing... and my last name happens to be staples (no, i cant give you a discount )

[Xwikki]

Ahh>! I just had to research that on youtube. XD WE DON'T HAVE THE SAME COMMERCIALS AS YOU>!!!!!! Stop confusing me. XD

[Soul Void]

my apologies

[Xwikki]

No need to aplologize, 'twas merely joking.