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to live within my creator

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jul 30, 2016 12:56 pm

I lay comfortably on the concrete. staring into the abyss that is thee novemeber sky.
Watching nothing but the gray and the movement Finding answers to all my why's.
As chem trails dispate into deadly clear air I feel the new fall breeze trickle through my hair.
concrete bed so soft and chill, creeps into my back stiff and still.
And i see God so large and whole to beautiful to look at with anything but my soul.
He pulls me in with a gaze from gray cloud how clould I not hear a voice so loud.
A voice so soothing so full of light. some thing so strong an full of such might.
I lay within my creator on this cold ground. I need no words to truely expound.
To myself at least it is as breathing. And i could ask for nothing more and nothing less.
but to feel this love so deep in my chest.
To know and to love and to feel.
To have in my heart everything so real.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby Sheena » Sat Dec 17, 2016 4:41 pm

Nothing about this writing is real.
Spend 100 hours reading Yeats, then redo.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jan 07, 2017 11:55 am

Lets see you say anything beyond some worn out insult that you try so hard to make sound edgy and perhaps the site of your name will no longer warrant immediate dismissal.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby Sheena » Sat Jan 07, 2017 1:14 pm

Give yourself more credit. The insults you inspire are quite original.
Here is something you need: gh
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby lenason » Mon Feb 18, 2019 4:56 am

spacejunkie wrote:I lay comfortably on the concrete. staring into the abyss that is thee novemeber sky.
Watching nothing but the gray and the movement Finding answers to all my why's.
As chem trails dispate into deadly clear air I feel the new fall breeze trickle through my hair.
concrete bed so soft and chill, creeps into my back stiff and still.
And i see God so large and whole to beautiful to look at with anything but my soul.
He pulls me in with a gaze from gray cloud how clould I not hear a voice so loud.
A voice so soothing so full of light. some thing so strong an full of such might.
I lay within my creator on this cold ground. I need no words to truely expound.
To myself at least it is as breathing. And i could ask for nothing more and nothing less.
but to feel this love so deep in my chest.
To know and to love and to feel.
To have in my heart everything so real.


I myself wrote this before the birth of my first son. I really liked this prose. This is a mix of haiku plus regular prose and it was the style of my university writing works.
My prof did not understand my essay and did not appreciate it positively, but I had no time to redo it. My third year was devoted to sporting achievements – I’ve won several competitions with other universities and I was appointed a captain of our tennis team.
My roommate advised me to take advantage of writing service for students and said that PapersOwl is the best. She was cool as a movie star and was the leader of the university team for three years. At the same time, she always had successful marks for all written work.
I selected PapersOwl from many different internet writing services and was happy about it. I found everything there that I needed and I selected the terms and descriptions. The keywords were needed for me to order my essay properly. PapersOwl prices didn't afraid me because were slightly higher other custom writing services. I ordered an essay $310 (ten pages). Short term essay - prices were higher. Next time I've used the live chat feature and contacted Papers Owl without losing time, very often.
But with time I've born my Benjamin, my soul was changed and I lost my unique poetry style and become a routine copywriter.
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