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to live within my creator

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jul 30, 2016 12:56 pm

I lay comfortably on the concrete. staring into the abyss that is thee novemeber sky.
Watching nothing but the gray and the movement Finding answers to all my why's.
As chem trails dispate into deadly clear air I feel the new fall breeze trickle through my hair.
concrete bed so soft and chill, creeps into my back stiff and still.
And i see God so large and whole to beautiful to look at with anything but my soul.
He pulls me in with a gaze from gray cloud how clould I not hear a voice so loud.
A voice so soothing so full of light. some thing so strong an full of such might.
I lay within my creator on this cold ground. I need no words to truely expound.
To myself at least it is as breathing. And i could ask for nothing more and nothing less.
but to feel this love so deep in my chest.
To know and to love and to feel.
To have in my heart everything so real.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby Sheena » Sat Dec 17, 2016 4:41 pm

Nothing about this writing is real.
Spend 100 hours reading Yeats, then redo.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jan 07, 2017 11:55 am

Lets see you say anything beyond some worn out insult that you try so hard to make sound edgy and perhaps the site of your name will no longer warrant immediate dismissal.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: to live within my creator

Postby Sheena » Sat Jan 07, 2017 1:14 pm

Give yourself more credit. The insults you inspire are quite original.
Here is something you need: gh
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