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repetition

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jul 30, 2016 12:54 pm

Intoxication falls hard on my skull,
bashes in the walls of perspective.
It always seems to cover me whole
although its never been my elective.
It washes so fluidly down the back of my throat.
The flavor i could call permanent.

It drifts in boldly like leader ship no holding back liquid currents.
So bitter on the tongue to taste a little freedom and I ask my self why I've never been comfortable leading but I cant say a thing with out my insides bleeding. And I don't know just why but i keep catching myself repeating.

Am I at it again or is this just fate, that I've walked this directions to decide what I make. Is a choice of my own , that i make a mistake, or a sign from above, to learn what to take.
Nothings clear


I find keep finding myself here

Insanity can't hold me back
I can learn even though I lack
I have rehearsed so many times
I have perfected a series of rhymes

Just to convey to you
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: repetition

Postby Sheena » Sat Dec 17, 2016 4:42 pm

Nobody likes poetry about self-pity.
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Re: repetition

Postby spacejunkie » Mon Nov 06, 2017 11:38 am

Can you not distinguish self pity from self awareness?
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: repetition

Postby Sheena » Mon Nov 06, 2017 12:51 pm

Of course, everyone can, you just don't seem able to write it, is all.
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Re: repetition

Postby spacejunkie » Sat Nov 11, 2017 5:01 am

Again another weak response, maybe your just loosing interest in me.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: repetition

Postby Sheena » Sun Nov 12, 2017 1:40 pm

Then be more interesting.
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Re: repetition

Postby spacejunkie » Sun Dec 10, 2017 10:53 am

Heres a link to all of my poetry, destroy me https://allpoetry.com/Magdalayney
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