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Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 8:39 am
by cannydreams
Restless and weary, sleep won't come
I crawl from my supposed slumber
Down my top floor stairs
Into a foggy mist
A strange dream like state
Yet I remain awake
While visions carefully partake
In playing games with my senses
I pray for only darkness
So I can hide inside it
Not a back lit fogginess
Where I constantly feel his wet kiss.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2015 2:49 am
by cannydreams
Where once a red heart beat .. a black one rests
Time has definitely done its best ..
Creatures of the dark have taken up nests.


( These are poems off dreams I have - in-case anyone is wondering, since this is a dream forum, I am journaling some dream poems )

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2016 3:16 am
by Clementine
I like these, they are menacingly creepy. do you like horror movies or creepy stuff? better than poems about mushy love.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2016 1:38 pm
by cannydreams
Clementine wrote:I like these, they are menacingly creepy. do you like horror movies or creepy stuff? better than poems about mushy love.


Thank you, Clementine.

I do enjoy a good horror movie, novel, it all really. I also have lots of horror like nightmares too - probably from all the horror tales I view.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2016 1:42 pm
by cannydreams
Trying to work this one out, off last nights dream but will post it as I have it for now and may revise it later on.


Look who slinks upon my bed sheets
In the dead of night
Sorry, you did not fright.
Trailing blood of a thousand suicides
Behind your sharpened tail
Your mission is a constant fail
I won't give in ..
to your particular brand of sin!

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 5:05 am
by Clementine
^ in your last poem was he? coming to get you to kill yourself? that would make a good short horror clip.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2016 6:21 am
by cannydreams
Yes, was a creature of the night that convinces people who are low, sad, and despondent to take their own lives, their particular shedding of blood feeds it.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:00 pm
by Clementine
If you drew it would be cool for you to add drawings to go with your poems because they are visual poems & that would be cool to do.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 10:59 pm
by cannydreams
That's a good suggestion, wish I could draw, but cannot really but I love your idea, Clementine. TY I don't have any current poems to post, we had a death in our family since last on so writing hasn't been top of my list - but hopefully next month.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2016 11:55 am
by cannydreams
I haven't been here for months.

Slowly gasping for air
Without any care
Hoping to slip away...
Never see another day
Pray for quick release...
Please.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2016 12:03 pm
by Clementine
That one sounds as if you might be depressed, or lost someone you love.
Makes you feel that way when reading it, cannydreams.

WB though.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:22 am
by cannydreams
Apologies my gaps on this site are huge.

Yes, was actually severely depressed at the time and if being honest at this current time as well. Happy it somehow conveyed my pain or how I was feeling though to others and thank you for reading and commenting back.

Re: Into the foggy mist

PostPosted: Tue Jun 20, 2017 5:26 pm
by Sheena
Here is an edit that improves:

cannydreams wrote:Look who slinks upon my bed sheets
In the dead of night. Behind your sharpened tail
I won't give in ..
to your particular brand of sin!