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New Poem

Postby Reveldevil48 » Thu Dec 10, 2015 7:34 pm

Just thought Id write a poem been a while since I wrote one.




Music
By Chelsey

Music
Sweet and soft
Hard and bitter


Music moves
in rhymes
and rhythms

The notes move
across sheets of paper
like words on a TV screen

Music moves the soul
Bringing people together
from all over the world

From country in the west
to sitar and flutes in the east
There's music everywhere

Enjoy.
"I'm so happy because today I've found my friends...they're in my head" Kurt cobain
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Re: New Poem

Postby otherworlds » Fri Dec 11, 2015 11:30 pm

That is a good summary of music within a poem 8-)
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Re: New Poem

Postby Reveldevil48 » Sat Dec 12, 2015 7:57 pm

Thanks, I had no other way to think about music, so I came with this :)
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Re: New Poem

Postby Sheena » Tue Jun 20, 2017 5:29 pm

The motivation is good. The poetry is not. There is no music in it.
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