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Black cat

Postby Reveldevil48 » Mon Nov 30, 2015 10:47 am

Black cat
By Chelsey

A little black cat
Sitting under the moon
Meowing from dusk till dawn

The black cat was lonely
People were frightened to go near him
As the cat would bring bad luck if he came near them

As silly as this superstition is
Black cats are quite friendly
One need not be afraid of bad luck

For if you see a little black kitten
Be sure to give him hugs and kisses
To show him that he is loved

"I'm so happy because today I've found my friends...they're in my head" Kurt cobain
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Re: Black cat

Postby Sheena » Mon Nov 30, 2015 10:50 am

You must go deeper. First read Rilke.
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Re: Black cat

Postby Clementine » Tue Jan 05, 2016 5:06 am

I like this poem.
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Re: Black cat

Postby pisces_dreamer » Wed Jan 06, 2016 12:29 am

If you read poetry as much as you wrote it you'll be wayyyyyy better. My recommendation, stop writing for now. Read. Study. Poetry is not easy, every word in a poem should have meaning. The only two words that connote meaning in this piece are "black cat." The rest (and I mean this as nicely as possible) is complete muck. I'm not sure how old you are, but even a child could do better than this. I don't intend to be disrespectful at all, just as I'm sure you didn't intend to be disrespectful when you shared your poem. I can tell you like to write, which is why I've taken the time out my day to write this lengthy response. I know you can do better. Again, put the pen down. Read.
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Black cat

Postby Anitabab » Mon Feb 27, 2017 9:45 am

M18 black cat ha ha now everyone who plays this tank will be sporting the DHO emblem.

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