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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Fri Sep 26, 2014 10:05 pm

I'm quite confuse right now, what am I going to comment on who are you referring? Yes .. I'm 14 not much writers in my family, I'll give you my review on your poems on Monday oK?


nono, you dont have to... i didnt mean it that way! better write instead!

I'm using a phone, so I can't write nor tell anyone how good your poetry is it suggestions because phones are uncomfortable, yes, his poems is not bad for a fellow 14 year old, yes?


YES! thats fair enough... molto bene...
All thought your style of poetry is not same with mine, like vampires, you both have poems a bit too hard for me to understand, I'm not a native English speaker,HeT? So I'll just review your poems on Monday, deeply sorry for that, I feel I let you all down,no?


NO... why? dont you ever worry anymore... worrying is bad for your soul! NOT-worrying is much healthier, see?


phones are uncomfortable
LOL yes they are... btw.: IRC ? do you know that ? :D :D the last time i used it im not sure if you were already born :D :D :D

im pretty sure theres an irc client for smartphones... da?




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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Sat Sep 27, 2014 1:38 am

no don't worry , it's cool :)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:55 am

o yes it is... well... quite some thread, that one, aint it? ... :)


someone will have to go with
had
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:11 am

Please don't make a chat thread out of my thread, fine to say a sentence or two about the persons poem above yours, compliment etc but don't just make single posts in a row to chat, that is what your PMs are for.

Also, MIss Vampire you have not played by the rules, why is that? You have never taken the last word of the poem above you either time, how come? Your new poem should BEGIN with the LAST word of the poem above you.

Last word was had

Had I told you all within my heart

I feel we would have never been apart

Is life fair?

Not when your heart, mind and soul does tear.

Laying still in the dark

Contemplating your last remark

Up comes the sun, I'm done.

The next original on the spot as you type poem begins with the word DONE
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:59 am

i did do that 2 times :crying: ... just got a bit lost the other times :noisemaker: my compliments turn into chats .
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:20 am

Done twas i with this bull shit ,
Another site I'll shall go and talk for a bit,
I was in a bad mood today the people knew,
Yet they somehow continued to screw and screw!
Oh! A thousand pardons i do crave ,
But to the words of poetry am i not a slave?
But wait.. what is that you say? my poetry is horribly bad?
Truly worse than what was written by a 5 year old lad?
oh anyway , good-bye!farewell!
oh and i almost forgot ... FUCKING HELL!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:25 am

Done twas i with this bull shit ,
Another site I'll shall go and talk for a bit,
I was in a bad mood today the people knew,
Yet they somehow continued to screw and screw!
Oh! A thousand pardons i do crave ,
But to the words of poetry am i not a slave?
But wait.. what is that you say? my poetry is horribly bad?
Truly worse than what was written by a 5 year old lad?
oh anyway , good-bye!farewell!
oh and i almost forgot ... FUCKING HELL!



hell yeah old vamp
come on old champ

dont get too pissed
since then you'd missed

me all on IRC
there we chatter
and be free

do you know what they were talking to me?
i will just come set this pit of a devil free
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:12 pm

free I am and here will be
until the day you all see me

one two three, I have many names to me
I will go and hold up thee

I will go and take that silver sword
I will go and cut that iron chords

I will go and save your world
I will go and all be turned

I will go and be thy queen
I will go and will be seen

I will be that shining dream
I will be that angels cream

sandwich for served up with a dish
of slam of hope of WILL and wish ;) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2SG9LmW2-o

[Reveal] Spoiler:
quite a pretty one, huh?


@treesandbees; was probably the best idea of you to make that thread...
[Reveal] Spoiler:
you cutie
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:36 pm

The World-Eater wrote:What the fuck?


The World-Eater wrote:"The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother’s keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee."


The World-Eater wrote:I think I'm going to erect a monument right here. Bronze this thread so the whole Galaxy knows.


wish you woke
you'd say "jope"?
lost your hope?
lost your dope?
dont you see?
all is me
eater-ly
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:22 pm

18+ warning

[Reveal] Spoiler:
eater-ly
just feel free
take the flight
take the ride
wet dreams tonight
out of reach
yet to teach
hard waves
on the beach
out of sight
taste fun,
taste light
waste some


delight

OT:
[Reveal] Spoiler:
Okay, added it, right click on avatar and click view image to see pic better
well at least ONE person in here with a working brain ;-) good, lesson for other girls.., ask treesandbees how internet is working ;-)

it's the off topic making threads worth reading...
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it's what I want, said Julie

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Sun Sep 28, 2014 6:43 am

Be brave said Michael to Joan one day,
There were voices of saints and she heard them say,
Dear Maiden of Lorraine , though violence is not usually the thing,
Please save France for god and make the good dauphin king ,
So off she rode with god in her heart,
And the Savior of France at once made a start.
Amazing the dauphin with her heavenly grace,
At the head of the army she gained her place,
So for god she fought and many towns she did save ,
Until 1340 her young life she courageously gave.
So now when a country is saved and a great light goes dark,
we will remember the name ... Joan of Arc.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Sun Sep 28, 2014 8:58 am

MissVampire wrote:Be brave said Michael to Joan one day,
There were voices of saints and she heard them say,
Dear Maiden of Lorraine , though violence is not usually the thing,
Please save France for god and make the good dauphin king ,
So off she rode with god in her heart,
And the Savior of France at once made a start.
Amazing the dauphin with her heavenly grace,
At the head of the army she gained her place,
So for god she fought and many towns she did save ,
Until 1340 her young life she courageously gave.
So now when a country is saved and a great light goes dark,
we will remember the name ... Joan of Arc.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOS6jbabXlI

Arc of light encompassing her
on the hunt out with her sword
throughout the day throughout the night
on the stake high out of hope and words
uphold thee my queen, saviour of worlds (not meeting u'r talent girl... sorry ;-))
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:40 pm

World out and dying,
Short life and counting,
I wish the wish I wished tonight,
End this day,
And come forth the night!,

Crying and crying in the dark,
Whispers had come forth no more,
Since you lay down,
And tormented me
Lay down the food
Humiliate me,
Because that's what you want
And so I wished ...

Cut your throat
Is what I wish
Insanity come forth to me,
Because sanity does not help no more..

Twisting and dying is what I seek,
Come and kill me,
As you wish
Care not the hidden blade
Out for your throat and down your brain,
Don't worry,
I'll make it slow..
So I can see
Your dreadful eyes
Full of hate and plea
I care not for life nor death!
Come and get me,
If you can

You can run,
But you can't hide,
You may try,
But you won't last,
I will find you,
And kill you last

No one can,
And no one will,
Come and save you,
From my hate
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:42 pm

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:42 pm

Freya_Nightmist wrote:World out and dying,
Short life and counting,
I wish the wish I wished tonight,
End this day,
And come forth the night!,

Crying and crying in the dark,
Whispers had come forth no more,
Since you lay down,
And tormented me
Lay down the food
Humiliate me,
Because that's what you want
And so I wished ...

Cut your throat
Is what I wish
Insanity come forth to me,
Because sanity does not help no more..

Twisting and dying is what I seek,
Come and kill me,
As you wish
Care not the hidden blade
Out for your throat and down your brain,
Don't worry,
I'll make it slow..
So I can see
Your dreadful eyes
Full of hate and plea
I care not for life nor death!
Come and get me,
If you can

You can run,
But you can't hide,
You may try,
But you won't last,
I will find you,
And kill you last

No one can,
And no one will,
Come and save you,
From my hate

The first one is a chant.. Similar of that of the witches, yes? I have a person in mind while making this.... It let's off some... hate in my system,da?
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:52 pm

Freya_Nightmist wrote:
Freya_Nightmist wrote:World out and dying,
Short life and counting,
I wish the wish I wished tonight,
End this day,
And come forth the night!,

Crying and crying in the dark,
Whispers had come forth no more,
Since you lay down,
And tormented me
Lay down the food
Humiliate me,
Because that's what you want
And so I wished ...

Cut your throat
Is what I wish
Insanity come forth to me,
Because sanity does not help no more..

Twisting and dying is what I seek,
Come and kill me,
As you wish
Care not the hidden blade
Out for your throat and down your brain,
Don't worry,
I'll make it slow..
So I can see
Your dreadful eyes
Full of hate and plea
I care not for life nor death!
Come and get me,
If you can

You can run,
But you can't hide,
You may try,
But you won't last,
I will find you,
And kill you last

No one can,
And no one will,
Come and save you,
From my hate

The first one is a chant.. Similar of that of the witches, yes? I have a person in mind while making this.... It let's off some... hate in my system,da?


da, I see
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Sun Sep 28, 2014 10:35 pm

hate is what you carry
thy will shall be fulfilled
yet you better hurry
before yourself is taken
away, since hate is greedy
once woken, must be stilled
your young heart bleeding
your young soul crying
your young star dying
take the sword
cut the cord
bring dismay
at the day
of revenge (it is not good,... actually... yet we have to carry on, da?)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:57 pm

Revenge is what you seek,
Revenge is all you can think,
To push that someone to that edge
Is what you want to see
Revenge is sweet
Revenge is a reward,
From the bottom to the top
Up, down and below

Your vengeance awaits
Come, And Let's see...
What you can do,
To the very best of your abilities!
Wait 'till your rope breaks!
I know you cant hold long, anyway!

Let the devil inside you awake,
Cling to your hopes and dreams!,
Just wait and see
'Till the mask breaks
Inside the hollow tree,
So why don't I
Push you, to the other side of here?
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:12 pm

:shock: :shock: :) :)



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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Tue Sep 30, 2014 12:21 am

free I am
and free I will be forever more
I am the man with no name
I am the shadow behind you
I am the winner of the game
I am the one who will get you through
I am the one, standing on the shore

free I am
and I will free you
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Tue Sep 30, 2014 12:57 am

you and me
don't you worry girl
we are the starforce https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I5kJF7n99vc
we are the twirl
we are but the hall of fame
we are the winners of the game
we will strike down on that shame
take their lifes and take their lame
images of nothing with a meaning at all
we will strike down and will
call
out our names
when the tower we WILL face
we are but the godleft race
we are but the unwanted children in the mid day's haze

relentless and pure
we are the cure

we are the key
to set them free

to make them see
the light

the star force light
shining bright

shine on you crazy diamonds
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby calyp$o » Tue Sep 30, 2014 1:05 am

world eater wrote:
what the fuck


JOPE
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby sweetshar » Tue Sep 30, 2014 2:58 am

Diamonds twinkling
like of my eyes when i see you.
Memorizing every details of your face from afar,
cos i can't laid my eyes on you if you're near.
I'm afraid you'll gonna read what i can't tell by my gaze
and you will hear what my heart beat says.
If i only have the guts like others,
if only i let myself get bold enough,
i should have grab that opportunity
to get in touch with you a long time ago.
But since i don't have any of them,
i think i should settle then,
by looking at you behind your back
or else seeing what's behind you when you're facing at me. :(
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Tue Sep 30, 2014 3:03 am

FREYA, this one's for YOU ! and your sis of course... :-)


diamonds to be
you and me
in my car
the fastest by far
the bestest by far
will travel fast
will travel far
will make use of the old scar
will make use of my old trunk
to get rid off all that junk

there's plenty of room in m car
you and me
Bonnie & Clyde
no one can hide
from our blinding light

old machine
runnin' steady
old machine
gettin' ready

hittin' hard
hittin' heavy

old dream
once was seen
old dream
old scar

come in here dear girl have a cigar
come in here dear girl, you're gonna go far
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Tue Sep 30, 2014 3:07 am

THEbridge :-)


me is a part of you, a broken piece, a fractal, a part of the whole, a piece of a star, a shattered diamond


welcome to the machine shar ! ;-)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby sweetshar » Wed Oct 01, 2014 12:33 am

Diamond or stars nothing compares your pair of eyes


But suddenly the feeling of sadness to me it came
For I know every reason,
Not why when or how
But who
And it will never be me

Christian Rome is the name
Don’t come near me or I’ll be lamed
I don’t want to be scarred
But damned thing so hard
The fact that I’m not yet stricken
But already been wounded.
No one rises suddenly in this world not even the sun.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Wed Oct 01, 2014 3:21 am

sweetshar wrote:Diamond or stars nothing compares your pair of eyes


But suddenly the feeling of sadness to me it came
For I know every reason,
Not why when or how
But who
And it will never be me

Christian Rome is the name
Don’t come near me or I’ll be lamed
I don’t want to be scarred
But damned thing so hard
The fact that I’m not yet stricken
But already been wounded.


wounded I was, and now I am cold
I hate it being old,
hate it being the one to unfold
you, but i already told you

who else should do it
believer in enemies,
instead of your friends
wouldn't it be nice
to let go off their hands?

every night i die
and every morning am born again
every night i cry,
every day must come back again

will there ever be a chance,
to be true, most likely not
so i WILL have to arrange
unless i don't and then WILL rot

i know what this means
i once hated a friend
regretted it hard in
nightmarish dreams
if i could


(the WORST poem i ever wrote, the absolute worst, i gonna better go and leave... i lost all my writers talents...)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissWong » Wed Oct 01, 2014 10:40 am

This looks like fun, not a poet though but I want to play :D so the rules are, if I read it right: has to be over four lines, a written as you type poem and starts with the last word of the poem above you, correct?

Last word I see is the word: could.

Could I fly above my mountains of regret
swim beneath my of ocean of tears
climb my biggest fears
could I achieve that much more?

Empathic heart full of gold
trading this for that won't make you soar
in this world..

Passion is lifes beautiful score
Reach high
and want for more.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby DarkStarlet » Wed Oct 01, 2014 3:57 pm

you should not be too modest, MissWong, you always are ...


more, she cried,
I want more
I want to see it all,

see the leaves fall
down to the ground

see the wind and the sun
here them old waves' sound

I want to stand until I fall
I want to go on till I call

out my name
proud
without shame
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Mon Oct 06, 2014 9:37 pm

Shame is my middle name,
Everything I do
I do it with a mess
No, you cant help me
Now go away
Leave me in my mess
Just like the rest!

Go on with your life!
Drown in your shame
Go down in your drinks
'Till nothing exists!

Let it dawn on you
That your alive and well
The day you call a life
Seems more like a lie

Let me help you
Pour your sadness
In this little cup
For all to see
The mess you and I made to do

Oh and bloody hell!
I forgot-To hell with you!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby skinnybitch8 » Tue Oct 07, 2014 4:21 am

you, and me, and maybe she, too,
triplets will join a dream of you
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:20 pm

Oh, lots new ones, thanks all who posted so far! :clap:

You watch and listen with intent
Spend your days trying not to vent

But in the evening it all comes back
remembering what is it to speak with tact

So again you quietly bottle it all up
but one day it will break your treasured tea cup

Spilling out, right down your arm and causing pain
but for now you restrain.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby AvrilONE » Thu Oct 09, 2014 2:16 am

oh see... it is the same for me... ok over the day... then it starts in the evening, and my nights sometimes become HORROR...

ok, on we go:



restrain no more
let go

complain no more
then go out
see the beauty about
it, like the trees
and the bees

Image


they were made for you
don't deny the blue
of the sky
don't deny

the ocean waves
and the stillness in the graves

of your fathers faces
of your useless races
of your empty spaces
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Tue Oct 14, 2014 1:49 am

Spaces,
That I can't see
All cramped up in this dream,
A dream where you and I live
So real,so painful,
How can I escape,
This poverty?

I look up in the sky
Blocked by buildings
Too far for me to reach
Too far for me to dream

I walk in the lonely streets
Full of sadness and pain
I share them the space
That I only save
For my family
Down that road

They push us aside
Away from the light
Away from the day
Treating us like the dirt
Under their feet,
No one can understand
No one can relate
Unless you feel the pain
Of poverty
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby morpheus23 » Tue Oct 14, 2014 4:04 am

poverty is in my heart, poverty is in you ...

you will shoot and I will drive
yet not in dreams, yet in our lives

you will turn from white to green
all your kindness will be seen

by morpheus the brother of sleep

I never brake, she got it wrong
all your revenge thee shall be felt

by calypso the sister of seas so deep

by the man without a name
by the winners of the game

yet you will have to learn a lot
until at last the fuckers rot

anyway, you will pass that test
coz you will learn just from the best
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby skinnybitch8 » Tue Oct 14, 2014 4:11 am

best would be to disappear

I know where i WILL go

it is an island in the wild

the sun & the waves hit hard

it is an island WORLDS APART

the wind cleans

my soul, the wind

makes me whole

on an island IN THE WILD

an island for a child

an island all alone

all the time it shone

in a vision of my youth

in a strange image

of ancient times

this island is but

where to go

all the way#

through the snow

...

just HOW can I go there

just how can I DARE

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby TheMAXX » Tue Oct 14, 2014 4:16 am

dare you go with me ....

out in the wastelands
Julia & me

out in the wild
naked and free

hunting and running
on with the spree

dark clouds coming
above, devour me

dark things coming
set light inside me!

darklings a' coming
coming inside me
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby morpheus23 » Tue Oct 14, 2014 9:37 am

me and you

we're in this together now

we will make it through somehow

we will drive until the world

turns ... we will drive until we drown

until we reach the stars

until we mend our hearts ...

unitl the day we die

down to the sea we'll fly
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby morpheus23 » Tue Oct 14, 2014 2:33 pm

fly me to the moon
fly me to the sun
fly me to the stars
fly me by ... fly fly

bye bye
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby HoodedClaw » Thu Oct 16, 2014 12:58 am

aha, here it is. kids...

"bye i said to her

bye i said to my love

my girl up above

you hate me for being your mirror
you hate me for being your face
you hate me for being your wake of the day

you never saw the dark inside me
you only saw what was makeup on

but i will mirror you
i will tear down that wall

until you cry
until you fall

you were the light for me
the light, you yourself did not see

i may be crazy
i may be old

i may be hazy
i may be cold

i know a place, where you would always hide
i know a place without the light

beneath the cover of darkness"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F7dKjljnc8E

i wrote this for my best friend, she and me were together at school, we drove around in her car. i love her like hell. ;)

what a girl that one was ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby sweetshar » Sat Oct 18, 2014 1:47 am

Darkness win over after seeing you with another,
terribly hurt but stood up thereafter.
I don't deserve this in the first place
I just can't refuse not to feel this shit
even if everybody told me i shouldn't.
Not so well..........
Too sad i went this far
and too mad to leave it better behind.
No choice i had but to get myself well soon
Moving on and on and on
And then get another heart break again i guess?? :lol: :) :(
No one rises suddenly in this world not even the sun.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Sat Oct 18, 2014 6:42 am

On and On I search for you,
Over the bridge
Over the meadow
I found the road you and I meet,
Relive the days, you and I see
Where the joys of the world
Was in our hands
Where we smiled with laughter
Pure of glee
No one can stop us,
No one could
Because no one dares ,
Come between you and me

Over the meadow
There we lie
In my mind
You and I
Still together, with flames in our eyes
No one could, and no one can,
Stop us until the last days of our good byes,
You and I, against the world
Forever together
Just you and me

But even the sun sets
In paradise
And so I leave
The boulevard, of broken dreams
And so we lay
In the cold hard ground,
Side by side
Now hate,
Evident In our hearts
No one could
And no one can
Stop the hate
Between our lives
Free will is but an illusion, Do not pursue such poison!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby morpheus23 » Sun Oct 19, 2014 7:29 am

i love her like hell. ;)



loveD i meant, i forgot the "d" ... lol

poetry comes, when i can write poetry again . . . ciao
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Tue Oct 21, 2014 1:13 am

Now right a poem already damnit
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby morpheus23 » Tue Oct 21, 2014 1:53 am

You And me. At sicily. Un giorno inferno. Citta della pace. City of peace. City of dreams. City of mine: )
Freya_Nightmist wrote:Shame is my middle name,
Everything I do
I do it with a mess
No, you cant help me
Now go away
Leave me in my mess
Just like the rest!

Go on with your life!
Drown in your shame
Go down in your drinks
'Till nothing exists!

Let it dawn on you
That your alive and well
The day you call a life
Seems more like a lie

Let me help you
Pour your sadness
In this little cup
For all to see
The mess you and I made to do

Oh and bloody hell!
I forgot-To hell with you!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby PuntoDiBlue » Mon Oct 27, 2014 12:27 am

mine are the days
and mine are the streets

mine is the sun
and fine are my needs

going old ways
like back in the days
i was free
no one around me but me

solo mi ... ;)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby PuntoDiBlue » Mon Oct 27, 2014 12:39 am

Freya_Nightmist wrote:On and On I search for you,
Over the bridge
Over the meadow
I found the road you and I meet,
Relive the days, you and I see
Where the joys of the world
Was in our hands
Where we smiled with laughter
Pure of glee
No one can stop us,
No one could
Because no one dares ,
Come between you and me

Over the meadow
There we lie
In my mind
You and I
Still together, with flames in our eyes
No one could, and no one can,
Stop us until the last days of our good byes,
You and I, against the world
Forever together
Just you and me

But even the sun sets
In paradise
And so I leave
The boulevard, of broken dreams
And so we lay
In the cold hard ground,
Side by side
Now hate,
Evident In our hearts
No one could
And no one can
Stop the hate
Between our lives


thats nice, you know... it has some "desire" "longing" in it ... like a feel for an old left place... it makes me think of my youth, which is too long ago ... :(
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Mon Oct 27, 2014 1:12 am

That's exactly I'm trying to put the reader to
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby PuntoDiBlue » Mon Oct 27, 2014 5:53 am

Freya_Nightmist wrote:That's exactly I'm trying to put the reader to


good! it worked for me :) you are a great writer Freya Nightmist, a great writer :)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Tue Oct 28, 2014 4:35 pm

Someone should make a poem since the last word is "lives" let me try ....

Lives have no meaning
When it reaches the point,
Of no return
Only misery can
And misery will
Be your companion
Throughout your journey

You can close your eyes
To things you hate to see
Cover your ears,
So you won't hear,
The pain and noise all around
To this place that you, oh, so loved

But you can't stop
This beating heart's
Feelings and sorrows
That you long to forget



And so I rest in (my) case ....
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