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Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem above

Postby treesandbees » Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:40 am

Title says it all. :geek:

When the summer sun turns to a dark grey sky,
bitter with cold and tearful eyes.

Reflecting only in a mirror within,
washing over everything but your sin.

Time to begin again.

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So next poster makes a poem with the start word being AGAIN.

Poem should have at least 4 lines or more. :clap:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Luidaeg » Mon Sep 22, 2014 11:18 pm

Again
The sun is shining
And again
The birds are singing
And again
The time has come
To say good-bye

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Does that count as enough lines?

If so then it's GOOD-BYE for the next one.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Tue Sep 23, 2014 1:01 am

goodbye, she said to me that day
the last thing she would ever say

goodbye, she said to me that day
the world stood still, she flew away

goodnight, she said to me that night
goodnight, take care the dead don't bite

goodnight, she said and took a flight
down to where the monsters hide
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Luidaeg » Tue Sep 23, 2014 3:49 am

Hide awhile with me tonight
Before the stars die and all is bright
Just let the time pass slowly by
And loneliness lay down and die
Til morrow comes to wake the day
Just tell me that you'll always stay
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:32 am

stay she cried
it was the way
she always lied

it was the day
my baby died
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:10 am

Thanks for joining the poem game - Luidaeg and Snow White. Nice poems you wrote too. I like impromptu poetry, bursts of creativity rocks! :clap:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby treesandbees » Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:11 am

A poem off the last word Died is :

Died and missing us as two,

Cried off losing all of you

Heaven is such a far off view

If only you were my angel

and would come through.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Tue Sep 23, 2014 12:07 pm

Through and through ,
Time after Time,
If only now you could hear my rhyme,
Because we are different and the same you see ,
It was you and me who were meant to be,
but my heart is caged ,
and my love enraged ,
Oh! If only god could let you know my heart ,
and for a beautiful ,true, new love to start,
You wouldn't mock and you wouldn't laugh,
Because to my soul you are the other half.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Tue Sep 23, 2014 3:28 pm

MissVampire wrote:Through and through ,
Time after Time,
If only now you could hear my rhyme,
Because we are different and the same you see ,
It was you and me who were meant to be,
but my heart is caged ,
and my love enraged ,
Oh! If only god could let you know my heart ,
and for a beautiful ,true, new love to start,
You wouldn't mock and you wouldn't laugh,
Because to my soul you are the other half.


hell, vampiress, you're killing me . . . :-) let's go . . .




half way through the way to your soul,
half way through to make you whole

on the flight to fill that hole,
torn in your heart that someone stole

on the flight to see your rhyme,
I just want to make you mine


;)




thanks Luidaeg...
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Postby treesandbees » Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:23 pm

Nice poems, MissVampire and THEventura. :clap:

Mine forever as was told

Never lied or did withhold

Any part of me from you

Ashamed you didn't follow through


Cowardly withdrawals were made

I hope it was worth the trade

a soul mate for a warm bed mate

Opens the floodgate.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Tue Sep 23, 2014 8:19 pm

gate to heaven, gate to hell
I don't know it, I can't tell

I just feel like giving all
until the very day the world will fall


yes, yours also very nice treesandbees! ... will wait until vampi is back ;-) you know, it has some advantages of not sleeping :)

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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Wed Sep 24, 2014 12:50 am

THEventura wrote:
gate to heaven, gate to hell
I don't know it, I can't tell

I just feel like giving all
until the very day the world will fall


yes, yours also very nice treesandbees! ... will wait until vampi is back ;-) you know, it has some advantages of not sleeping :)

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Hi guests! *shakehands* nice to meet you !!

I shall join and try!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Wed Sep 24, 2014 12:54 am

THEventura wrote:
gate to heaven, gate to hell
I don't know it, I can't tell

I just feel like giving all
until the very day the world will fall


yes, yours also very nice treesandbees! ... will wait until vampi is back ;-) you know, it has some advantages of not sleeping :)

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Hi guests! *shakehands* nice to meet you !!

I'm guessing the last word would be fall, da?

Fall, I did,
Fallen in my own demise,
In the devil's hand is my heart,
Where all my hopes had died,
Along with my heart

And I live through life,
With regret in my eyes
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:43 am

eyes in the dark
fading out

but a tiny spark
once were proud

became still
onece were loud

once were light
shining bright

once were stars
turned to scars

once were neat
once were heat

once were fire
child's desire

take the flight
fight the night

fight the dark
light thy spark

get the gun
see the sun

one two three
all of me

six five four
to the core

at the cost
of innocence lost
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:50 am

Lost, in the barren land,
Once my country
Now in ruins

Hopes, dashed all over
Life, it's not over
Secrets, buried in the snow
My heart, lost
Even so
I go on
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Wed Sep 24, 2014 1:59 am

good girl... :)
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Wed Sep 24, 2014 6:43 am

Elita-san first thought me being a woman although I wrote I sang Nick Cave ... she must read more thorouly...

well on we go



on the borderline I'm standing
numb & dumb & life defending

on the road to no mans land
on the track without a name
sent to start, back to game
yet I'll need some other hand

to guide me through the rest
this game only for the best
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Postby THEventura » Wed Sep 24, 2014 6:44 am

brother: you better not study biology
sister: you better keep u'r ass out of here... not such a nice place to be for a kid

vampiress: hello ! ;) Snow and me being the same ... of course ;-)


edit: ok then quickly "the bridge"


best
would be to disappear
yet were bound to be right here
all of you and all of I



see you then . . . have to take that old "fucker" slade down ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:05 am

ON and ON I'm scaring myself so badly right now,
My singing voice sounds like that of a cow !
I've tried and I've tried and practiced and practiced,
but god i sound like I've swallowed a cactus!
Lets hope this will change and change for good,
and sing beautifully is something i definitely should,
for if i don't go on and on with the he show,
i tell you one day my head will just blow!
(but not really though ;) )
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Postby THEventura » Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:10 am

MissVampire wrote:I'm scaring myself so badly right now,
My singing voice sounds like that of a cow !
I've tried and I've tried and practiced and practiced,
but god i sound like I've swallowed a cactus!
Lets hope this will change and change for good,
and sing beautifully is something i definitely should,
for if i don't go on and on with the he show,
i tell you one day my head will just blow!
(but not really though ;) )


I'm also scared . . . yet it must be overcome ...
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wait until you find what was going on in forum last night... :hurl:
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Postby MissVampire » Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:13 am

which forum? It sounds interesting :ecstatic:
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Wed Sep 24, 2014 7:10 pm

blow your mind
snow will find
you in the dark
snow will mend
your shattered heart


I hope you didn't read through all of it vampi... I had to take some sleep, see? ... see you then girls
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Postby THEventura » Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:52 am

I've tried and I've tried


know that one, vampi ? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2jmiLB3j_-E sing it ...
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:58 am

Oy what's the last word?
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:03 am

SnowWhite wrote:blow your mind
snow will find
you in the dark
snow will mend
your shattered heart


I hope you didn't read through all of it vampi... I had to take some sleep, see? ... see you then girls


(My)Heart would know
What I'm feeling now
I can close my eyes
close my mind
but can never close my dying heart

I wish I can
I wish I can't
But what is more?
In this dying heart?

Would you understand
This dying heart?
Even thought I can't lose anything,
Because I lost everything
Now I go
Somewhere I don't know

Hoping someone would know
Someone to care
Now I see you
And You see me
And now I ask of you:
Would you mend
This broken soul?
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Postby THEventura » Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:07 am

suppose i have to drive to the woods and cry ... ... ... i'll be back
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:33 am

THEventura wrote:suppose i have to drive to the woods and cry ... ... ... i'll be back

Oh wait, too strong for you?? Is it my poem or something else?
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Postby THEventura » Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:04 am

Freya_Nightmist wrote:
SnowWhite wrote:blow your mind
snow will find
you in the dark
snow will mend
your shattered heart


I hope you didn't read through all of it vampi... I had to take some sleep, see? ... see you then girls


(My)Heart would know
What I'm feeling now
I can close my eyes
close my mind
but can never close my dying heart

I wish I can
I wish I can't
But what is more?
In this dying heart?

Would you understand
This dying heart?
Even thought I can't lose anything,
Because I lost everything
Now I go
Somewhere I don't know

Hoping someone would know
Someone to care
Now I see you
And You see me
And now I ask of you:
Would you mend
This broken soul?



no, dont worry, it's just that i cut my hand while preparing some food, AND being molested by slade STILL
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Postby MissVampire » Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:48 am

(If thy) soul cheque thee that I come so near,
Swear to thy blind soul that I was thy 'Will,'
And will, thy soul knows, is admitted there;
Thus far for love my love-suit, sweet, fulfil.
'Will' will fulfil the treasure of thy love,
Ay, fill it full with wills, and my will one.
In things of great receipt with ease we prove
Among a number one is reckon'd none:
Then in the number let me pass untold,
Though in thy stores' account I one must be;
For nothing hold me, so it please thee hold
That nothing me, a something sweet to thee:
Make but my name thy love, and love that still,
And then thou lovest me, for my name is 'Will.'
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Postby calyp$o » Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:17 am

If thy soul cheque thee that I come so near,
Swear to thy blind soul that I was thy 'Will,'
And will, thy soul knows, is admitted there;
Thus far for love my love-suit, sweet, fulfil.
'Will' will fulfil the treasure of thy love,
Ay, fill it full with wills, and my will one.
In things of great receipt with ease we prove
Among a number one is reckon'd none:
Then in the number let me pass untold,
Though in thy stores' account I one must be;
For nothing hold me, so it please thee hold
That nothing me, a something sweet to thee:
Make but my name thy love, and love that still,
And then thou lovest me, for my name is 'Will.'





Will you come and take that ride
will you come and be my bride

will you be my shining light
will you hold me really tight

will you walk another life
will you go out on a strife

to hunt them fuckers down
recapture thy old crown

I have all but been a clown
in muddy waters I was drowned
in muddy moods alone and frowned

though they didnt want me here
I will show them what they fear

I will stand until I fall
I will be there and will call

out loud all of your names
I'm the winner of their games

I'm the the light that cuts them down
I'm the star that makes them drown

I'm the angel out of dust
I'm the hero at the cost

of innocence lost
of dreams long passed

I will take them down
until you got your crown

I will be the last one standing
I will be your life defending

our story never ending
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Postby MissVampire » Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:20 am

That's great ! :)
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Postby calyp$o » Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:44 am

o thank you so much MissVampire :-)

you are a better writer! if you ask me... I just saw you also sing! well, thats nice :) very nice to meet you!
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Thu Sep 25, 2014 10:14 pm

Ending my life
For the things I loved never met
Ending my life is all I see
Ending my life is all I write
Ending is the only thing I know
For the people I know
Now shattered
By this ugly world,
Friends are so foreign to me
Family is just a memory
And Now I hold you tight,
Watching you is my only delight,
I whispered caring nothingness
To the child that I now carry:
"Be careful, child
For your my only pride"
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Postby calyp$o » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:20 am

pride in my eyes, gone, given to them sinners
hide in my paths, down the drain, ride my old train

down by the station, heading towards
wastelands and deserts, playing my cards

all for the show, all for the pride
all through the snow, mean old bride

get on fetch that old machine
old mean train, running on steam

old mean train, sharp at mind
jump on the trail, leave them behind

go use them scars, you baker of stars


(there are one or the other quite good writers in here, it seems, and one outstandingly good one, Freya)
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:55 am

my bad ...........
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:57 am

Freya_Nightmist wrote:
calyp$o wrote:pride in my eyes, gone, given to them sinners
hide in my paths, down the drain, ride my old train

down by the station, heading towards
wastelands and deserts, playing my cards

all for the show, all for the pride
all through the snow, mean old bride

get on fetch that old machine
old mean train, running on steam

old mean train, sharp at mind
jump on the trail, leave them behind

go use them scars, you baker of stars


(there are one or the other quite good writers in here, it seems, and one outstandingly good one, Freya)

Why thank you old chap!

Stars, Hidden in sight
Light, radiating in them;
I would lie down
And look for you,
I remember the beauty in your eyes
The passion of our love
That captivating smile,
Smile for me,love
I would say,

I remember the days when we were meant to be,
I should have helped you
I should have been there

I close my eyes
And see your dying eyes,
Regret written all over,
As I watch you die in my eyes,
I regret every second,
I knew I shouldn't have left
I knew I shouldn't have gone,
I knew I should have protected you,
My beloved,
My love,

I left you with an aching heart
And yet you smiled,
And Forgave me
When I knew you shouldn't have,

It is my fault
Through me you have died,
In that dreadful car crash,
It should have been me, my love

Year after year,
I come to you
Praying for your peace

I hope you know
That In my heart you would stay,


And so I lay down,
In this field of flowers,
Watching the midnight sky,
Watching the stars that could have competed with that smile
Watching every minute in my life unfold in my very eyes,
Remembering,
Regretting,






















































I opened my eyes,
And watched in solemn peace,
The sight to behold,
All taken by me
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Postby calyp$o » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:59 am

Goodness. One can not write like that at 14? Can one? No worry, girl, I'm just puzzled a bit. I am 29. But I'm no old chap, still feel like a, well 25 maybe :) :) Youre killing me!
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Postby Freya_Nightmist » Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:01 am

calyp$o wrote:pride in my eyes, gone, given to them sinners
hide in my paths, down the drain, ride my old train

down by the station, heading towards
wastelands and deserts, playing my cards

all for the show, all for the pride
all through the snow, mean old bride

get on fetch that old machine
old mean train, running on steam

old mean train, sharp at mind
jump on the trail, leave them behind

go use them scars, you baker of stars


(there are one or the other quite good writers in here, it seems, and one outstandingly good one, Freya)

Whew, I edited my poem a lot perfecting it for you, thanks for the support!
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Postby calyp$o » Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:06 am

I do it like: I read the one above (try to keep in mind the spirit of it) then I go for it. ;) nice writing! I still cant believe that. Maybe more writers in your family? I have a smaller brother, he also does some. But he sucks, actually :D shh! dont tell him!
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Postby AmazonWarrior » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:23 pm

hey , I'm 14 so here's my best try ...

Oh every single , pure and glimmering rain drop that rolls like a single pearl down my window,
yes every single one,can not add up to the amount of love i have for you.
And the way the wind seems to whisper your name as it surrounds and stirs the autumn leaves,
I know it will never bathe the trees , the way your love bathes me.
And the way the sun chases the moon , because like me - it yearns to be complete.
And my soul will never be whole , without you.
Because your love and passion consumes me more than a forest will be consumed by a fire born in the heat of summer.
Just looking into your deep eyes , that sparkle like icicles in the depths of winters heart,
I realize that as well as starting the fiery passion within me , you can douse those flames,
and what is left is truly love.
And only when are hearts and minds are together ,can there truly be a soul,
And not even god can stop our love,
Because through and through eternity ,
there will always be you and me...

It's crap i know ... I'm lacking inspiration right now.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:30 pm

that's good! how about :
Me? you say ? And what is a kiss, specifically? A pledge properly sealed, a promise seasoned to taste, a vow stamped with the immediacy of a lip, a rosy circle drawn around the verb 'to love.' A kiss is a message too intimate for the ear, infinity captured in the bee's brief visit to a flower, secular communication with an aftertaste of heaven, the pulse rising from the heart to utter its name on a lover's lip: 'Forever.” :D
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:33 pm

It's crap i know ...
NO its NOT ! ... hell ... where did all of you 14 year olds come from? WRITE ON !
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:36 pm

MissVampire wrote:that's good! how about :
And what is a kiss, specifically? A pledge properly sealed, a promise seasoned to taste, a vow stamped with the immediacy of a lip, a rosy circle drawn around the verb 'to love.' A kiss is a message too intimate for the ear, infinity captured in the bee's brief visit to a flower, secular communication with an aftertaste of heaven, the pulse rising from the heart to utter its name on a lover's lip: 'Forever.” :D


you let Freya comment on that one... Vampiress... you are a "deep" writer... yes you are... I'll respond to them later... WILL first have to bring some friends here... :)
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Postby AmazonWarrior » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:37 pm

thank you ! : :cabbagepatch: i haven't got any more poetry at the moment though.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby SnowWhite » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:44 pm

never believe in anyone telling sth else... this forum is a bad place... yes it is,
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Vampiress, what do you think of her poem? you can read better english than me . . .
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby MissVampire » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:50 pm

It's great :D sounds like what i was writing at 14 , but better :D this is it put through Google translate (u are German right?):
Oh jeder einzelne , rein und schimmernde regen Tropfen, der wie eine einzige Perle mein Fenster herunter rollt ,
ja jeder einzelne kann nicht bis zu der Höhe der Liebe, die ich für Sie.
Und die Art und Weise der Wind scheint , Ihren Namen zu flüstern , wie sie umgibt und bewegt die Blätter im Herbst,
Ich weiß, es wird nie die Bäume , die Art und Weise Ihre Liebe badet mich zu baden.
Und die Art, die Sonne jagt den Mond , denn wie mir - es sehnt sich vollständig zu sein .
Und meine Seele wird nie ganz sein , ohne dich.
Weil Ihre Liebe und Leidenschaft verzehrt mich mehr als ein Wald wird durch einen Brand in der Hitze des Sommers geboren verzehrt werden.
Einfach mal in die tiefen Augen , die funkeln wie Eiszapfen in den Tiefen der Winter Herz,
Ich weiß, dass so gut als Ausgangs die feurige Leidenschaft in mir , können Sie diese Flammen zu löschen ,
und was übrig bleibt, ist wirklich Liebe.
Und nur, wenn es die Herzen und Köpfe zusammen sind, kann es wirklich eine Seele zu sein ,
Und nicht einmal Gott kann unsere Liebe zu stoppen,
Weil durch und durch die Ewigkeit ,
es wird immer du und ich ...

don't know if that's an accurate translation coz it is Google translate.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:53 pm

yes i am, google translate is not that accurate for poetry, agree...

yet it's quite good! I couldn't even thoroughly READ at 14 . . . thats just why!


so I'llgo on with "me" and "forever", right?




you and me forever
in the state of never
neverland, take her hand
and guide her through
all the dark inside of you
all the pain they gave to her
all the hurt they cast on her

was but a grain, what was left of me
yet i will rise and uphold thee
yet i will take that curse off you
yet i will have to take you through

the blinding light
the dawning sight

of life to come
of years to come
of tears to shed
of the one you never had...


(i know this is not worthy of her talent, yet i cant do it better... well, no more "wise" words for now)
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Postby MissVampire » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:16 pm

that's awesome ! your all great at writing poetry!
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby THEventura » Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:22 pm

so are you Vampiress... so are you ... make songs out of them... thats what they're supposed to be ...
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Freya_Nightmist » Fri Sep 26, 2014 8:30 pm

THEventura wrote:
MissVampire wrote:that's good! how about :
And what is a kiss, specifically? A pledge properly sealed, a promise seasoned to taste, a vow stamped with the immediacy of a lip, a rosy circle drawn around the verb 'to love.' A kiss is a message too intimate for the ear, infinity captured in the bee's brief visit to a flower, secular communication with an aftertaste of heaven, the pulse rising from the heart to utter its name on a lover's lip: 'Forever.” :D


you let Freya comment on that one... Vampiress... you are a "deep" writer... yes you are... I'll respond to them later... WILL first have to bring some friends here... :)

I'm quite confuse right now, what am I going to comment on who are you referring? Yes .. I'm 14 not much writers in my family, I'll give you my review on your poems on Monday oK? I'm using a phone, so I can't write nor tell anyone how good your poetry is it suggestions because phones are uncomfortable, yes, his poems is not bad for a fellow 14 year old, yes? All thought your style of poetry is not same with mine, like vampires, you both have poems a bit too hard for me to understand, I'm not a native English speaker,HeT? So I'll just review your poems on Monday, deeply sorry for that, I feel I let you all down,no?
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