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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby pisces_dreamer » Sat Jan 09, 2016 6:27 am

God, do you hear me?
I did Hail Mary three times
just like the priest said.
I confessed my sins
in a booth crafted
by sinners
yet blessed
by sinners
yet they're able to give me the answers.
Tell me God,
how's this man in all black
with white collar
calling to you to forgive me
for my sins
and blessing water, wine, and bread
and telling me which scripture oughta be read?
How's I'm supposed to understand
this elder scroll
read by an elder soul
with a voice about to go.

Oh yeah, you told me.
It's called faith.
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Postby puppyjill » Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:11 am

Faith
Faith is what I have,
It's my inner strength my guide.
It protects me from myself,
When I have nowhere else to hide.
It grows stronger everyday
This is why I pray.
My ego made of sin,
I force his light within.
An together we will win.
Resistance is futile, the world as we know is forever gone.
Fear not for a hero will arise.
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Postby spacejunkie » Fri Mar 11, 2016 11:07 am

Win a thousand,
never more
Take my breath
I'm feeling sore

Carve my heart
its getting tight
Craft a place
You'll sleep at night

Feed the flames,
I'm starving under
Bed is warm
I still hear the thunder

Wetter days
colder nights
looking up
still heaven in sights.

Broken glass has left in splinters
Scars and chaff from harsher winters.
Plenty love and plenty mercy
Drink in the light were all thirsty

Tell your brothers you love them
And remember that god saves.
Hear the thunder in the distance
Feel his righteous waves
Make room in your heart
a place for God to dwell
Surely he will save you
Pull you up from hell.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Postby BoxyTheWizard » Thu Apr 28, 2016 1:17 pm

Hell, a place I thought so far from us, so far from me
A place that could be shielded, and kept locked away in life
Yet now the truth, which saddens my heart, I clearly see
Here, the world is filled with hatred, death, and strife

Darker, are hearts of some than the deepest, coldest cave
It throws us down so far where at last we all lose hope
Evil corrupts, and destroys, and throws us into early graves
Destroying the mind, and soul until we can no longer cope

Pushing us downwards, they torture us until we finally die
They laugh, and taunt, amused as one by one we take our last breath
We send a prayer, peering past their faces for a last glimpse of sky
Only now we welcome in the sweet release of death
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby puppyjill » Fri Apr 29, 2016 10:02 am

Death:
Death is a stage we move into,
It's a place of mystery.
Death can be something that motivates you,
Or makes you part of history.
Never underestimate your life,
even if its only a stage we occupy.
Moving past our ignorance,
an into life of God's reply.
Resistance is futile, the world as we know is forever gone.
Fear not for a hero will arise.
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Postby spacejunkie » Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:29 pm

Replies I've waited, so long adore
and serenaded at your door.
With sweet notions of a pink flesh blush,
with whispers of love in tones of hush.

For centered in my one minds whole,
is love for you deep in my soul.

I bed you not to wait forever,
do not watch our ties be severed
Time it wastes, like a smothered child,
and at our wakes we all still smile
Each day passes, a little further,
waiting for that second murder.

I beg you love do not depart
Do not give up this dying art

When days sink to a lowly grey and finally all will wither away
When hearts have sunk into the deepest grave I swear my dear,
Love will save
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Postby Clementine » Sat Apr 30, 2016 1:27 pm

Save the end of day for me
Make time for us to be
Together & alone
Ditch your phone
Stay in at home.
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Postby puppyjill » Tue May 03, 2016 10:27 am

Clementine wrote:Save the end of day for me
Make time for us to be
Together & alone
Ditch your phone
Stay in at home.

On point with your poem Clementine I like it.

Phone:
Call me soon upon your cell phone,
never let a day go by that you feel alone.
Keep an ear out for my ring,
the sound will be when angels sing.
Don't fret if I'm a little too late,
for I'll be waiting at heaven's Gate.
Resistance is futile, the world as we know is forever gone.
Fear not for a hero will arise.
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Postby sweetshar » Sat May 07, 2016 1:02 am

Gate of your heart
I smell flowers
Like an art,
there are colors everywhere.
It's a place every girl wished to enter.
Attractively wondered what's inside i got in
I'm too overwhelmed to even see clearer
So I got back outside
...bleedin'??
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Postby spacejunkie » Sat May 07, 2016 3:06 am

Bleeding, bloodied, black grey bruise
but whose to say I even lose
I've wasted time on pain again
I've furthered away all of my friends
I never wished to grow apart,
Your still present in my heart
Although the day tolls on and on
It feels like all new faces are drawn
and each passing personality is a temporary endeavor.
A mind is juts a mind, no matter how clever.
So i will not hold you, on that left hand right
I will not blame you for your cold cold nights.
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Postby sweetshar » Mon May 09, 2016 6:11 pm

Nights after we broke it
Was like that of the season
after a heavy sunny summer,
Darkness was replaced by blank spaces
Numb, can't see it's blurry.
That time i thought was the worst
I don't even want to see the future already
'Where's home?' i barely asked
'I'm lost please come back to me.'

But despite of that emotions disarrayed
I've got to choose to continue on my own
Practicing the life living without the other side of me
Believing i am moving on, by this time i still am....
No one rises suddenly in this world not even the sun.
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Postby spacejunkie » Sat May 14, 2016 9:57 am

Am I what I want to be,
Or something that needs growth

A hundred feelings out at sea
I need another dose

take the bite and hope you grow
Like alice and the shroom

Walk down the isle no cold feet
Kiss the face of your groom

Slip and slide up to your palace
dig your heels in deep

Look at silly falling alice
won't you watch her weep.
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Postby sweetshar » Sun May 15, 2016 7:00 pm

Weeps like a baby
Cares like a nanny
Fondles like a puppy
Nags like repeatedly
That's a mommy for me.

PS: Happy mother's everyday mommies.. :)
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Postby BoxyTheWizard » Thu Jun 23, 2016 2:07 pm

Me.

A piece shaped by hands that make each perfect imperfection.
A piece like no other, made with time and care.

Each flaw only adds to the masterpiece, only adds to the beauty of it all.
Weathered by love, hate, sadness, and joy.

Other hands try to pull, twist, and shape the peice.
Taking each flaw, and sense of personality, and tossing it away.

They try to make the piece look exactly like the others.
Rob it of it's beauty, because they think that is perfect.
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Postby spacejunkie » Fri Jun 24, 2016 12:28 pm

Perfect perfection drips down from the sky
Seeping into my brain, drains in my eye

Godly redemptions soak all through me
Liquid savors so many beautiful flavors.
It cuts right through me.
It cuts right through
We all know and we all knew.

This perfect drip could soak you too.
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Postby ceceteh » Fri Jul 08, 2016 10:00 pm

Too much grief,
too many sacrifices
for those whose souls
have been filled with fire.
Let them burn, night and day
Till the wind's howling desire.

Too much pain,
too many deaths
for those who fear
the cold's icy breath.
Let them burn, night and day
Till they arise from slumber.
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Postby BoxyTheWizard » Wed Jul 13, 2016 7:04 pm

Slumber.

Silently sleeping for the last time upon the grass.
Lifeless, a still form among the tall, waving fronds.
Under the starry sky, illuminated by the soft glow of the moon.
Melancholy bird song plays, beautifully dismal.
Before the moon, a lone wolf cries mournfully as the crickets start their symphony.
Eternally listening to the same soft music.
Restful, sleeping peacefully forever.
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Postby spacejunkie » Sun Jul 17, 2016 11:10 am

For ever is a long time
with many ins and outs
Forever is a long time....

And with death you thought you'd see the end
But angels scream, now begin! Begin!
And if you find it alive
You'll find it with in
The angels of yours,
Purify sin.

If forever is not a real time
Then how in fact did it begin
and if forever was such a long time
Whose made it to the end.

If forever found the wrong time, would it all be destroyed....
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Postby Cam » Thu Jul 21, 2016 10:51 pm

Detroyed love,
Like a chalk drawing
Washed clean away by the rain
And yet somehow,
Loves rises again
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Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jul 23, 2016 1:02 pm

Again i am called to no avail...
Some how my issues will not ale.
Problems linger under the skin
To meth addiction, i give in.
two weeks clean, means nothing to me
Two years clean means nothing to me.
A one night stand with my drug of choice

and now my home is caving in.
Every time I lean on sin
Its put on the table and I can't say no
Im just not able, I can not go.

Some say its not an issue,
how i'm in control
but some times satan plays a quiet role

and in my life he lives by the name of addiction
for it seems my only infliction
The power it holds in my life
is strappingly concise.
its gone for months.....
resurfaces once...
destroys everything I've worked for....
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Postby pisces_dreamer » Fri Aug 05, 2016 7:31 pm

For you and yours alike
I walk this Johnny line
narrow on the dike
until it breaks.

Im in this cell flooded
with tears and salty shakes now
while you work your master thesis
about the issues of adolescence.

What a wonder-- you went left and I went right,
Ill remember that night forever when you promised me forever,
three months later the word I heard was never,
now I'm shaking, an ocean away my heart is breaking
and you dont even feel the tremors of my earth quaking.

Three years later, im breaking into cars,
fucking sluts who wish they're stars
and packing heat instead of rubbers
while you work your master thesis
about the issues of adolescence.
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Postby spacejunkie » Sun Oct 02, 2016 12:36 pm

Adolescence makes me sick The angst and pain just to much shit
The water stain it brings on Rot, The drugs again, just bring a shot.
Slippery savory sharp at the tip, press into my vein....... It makes me sick

Angst and pain just to much shit, adolescence, not again.

Sex and drugs and lying theif, wake up dead, only to my relief.
And in the end, baby, we all falter. tell me now, how cold is the water.
And if you could, just tell me how you feel... but if you can't dont make it unreal.
Cause I'm sick of shit its wasting too, dont make me tired, to sick of you.

Adolescence not again, to many losses to little friend

Pain and hurt and ice on the ankles tell me now, have you been trampled?
And is life to much to handle, will you give in tonight.
Please say no and that your strong, so that atleast i have some one to lean on
And aint just left all to myself, because you no i got such little wealth.
And if i beg you to please stay does it matter how i treat you, in what ever way
Maybe I'll intice you wil my love, and bring up just so I can shove.

Can i press you all the way back to, adolescence is that what i should do
Give angst
let me make it clear
In place of heart is deeply yearnin, in place of mind is desire burning
and time is ticking for me and you, yeah can i hold you down is that what i should do.

Hold you down just to pull you up, press you down just to press my luck
and in the end, were all the same
and in the end
we go from where we came.
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Postby dreamhoney8280 » Fri Oct 14, 2016 11:40 am

Came to drink,
Sighed at ripples
Dipped hands

Blinked at stars
Imagined pretty
Stared at scars
Returned home.
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Postby spacejunkie » Sun Oct 16, 2016 9:57 am

Home is where the heart is has been said
Home is in my chest, its where i am led.
In the barrel of my ribs so safe and warm
Protected by flesh and bone and muscle from any harm.

Home is where the heart is they say
Climb into my chest and pray
I lead you to the core of me
I'll give you what i have, plenty.

Home is where i should be right now.
If I lived here, Id be home right now.

Home is where the heart is heard
Home is in flight for the birds
Home is in freedom for the souls
Home is the moment you find yourself whole.
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Postby sweetshar » Mon Oct 24, 2016 11:42 am

Wholeheartedly I gave us chance
Just sparks aren't there
I chose to see you more often
Only to realized it was really not love after all
I believe what I did was the best decision I made that time,
since I don't want to last long the pain anymore.
No one rises suddenly in this world not even the sun.
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Postby BrooksWindow » Tue Oct 25, 2016 7:39 pm

anymore life has lost its luster
days close in filled with fluster
somehow a smile
despite this chocking cluster
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Postby Clementine » Wed Oct 26, 2016 5:21 am

Cluster - ing around the hole in ground
Semi - circle all around
Waiting for the unknown to be seen
But it was only... Irene.
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Postby operatormike » Thu Oct 27, 2016 11:41 am

Irene, the muse of Poe, alas
had struck his heart with love and pain
as light shines through a crystal glass
her beauty shone where she was lain.

The life that set his heart on fire
was gone to ride the winds of time
yet her spirit did inspire
much wondrous verse, beauty and rhyme.

Now Irene rests in lifeless slumber
and Poe himself has retired to his uncertain shadowy heaven
Yet we are not left with emptiness and darkness,
But the ineffable light and beauty of the marks he had scattered across the leaves of eternity.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby pisces_dreamer » Fri Oct 28, 2016 9:39 am

Eternity frolics softly in my mind,
I can't forget your eyes, like wildfire
burning the brush in me.
Now I only see them when mine close,
but I'll never forget so time sows you.

I lay froze for a minute, but it feels like forever,
My closed eyes wrapped in your feather
of an embrace, softly frolicking
in a misplaced flame,
replacing and replacing
but never erasing.

Eternity frolics softly in my mind.
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Postby spacejunkie » Fri Oct 28, 2016 9:42 am

Eternity can be had
By the human mind
And for this grace I am Glad
That Its something we can find.

In finding it we shed the flesh
These bodies bitter fruit.
And in this beautiful grid mesh
We exit the earthly suit

For kingdoms are awaiting
Lined in glitter Gold
Angels serenading
Teaching age is not old.
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Postby Clementine » Sat Oct 29, 2016 7:37 am

Old is how you feel, not always how you look
Or the age you are.
Sometimes life gives you a deep internal scar
So learn to be happy with yourself
Ignore naysayers and self doubt.
Life is to be treasured
Not measured.
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Postby operatormike » Mon Oct 31, 2016 12:18 pm

Measured up,
measured down,
measured for shoes
fit for a clown.
The shoes don't fit,
they're too big for my feet,
yet I must try to walk
can't admit to defeat.
Defeat of a clown
measured up,
measured down.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby kapriolwry » Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:24 pm

Oh okay Yes. Those aweful socks just got a new lease on life. Thanks for describing the top, IMR Now where did I put my scissors?
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Postby operatormike » Tue Nov 15, 2016 10:44 am

Since that last post is oddly random, probably an advertising bot, I am going to follow my own post...down!

Down the winding stairway in the berth deck
sleeps a humble sailor in his hammock.
He left his red haired girlfriend and his mother
To serve his God and country in due honor.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby Richardovellee » Mon Dec 26, 2016 1:26 am

Yes, it was clear that fear of his work not continuing was Jimmys fear. But that is not unusual for a writer. In fact, one of the reasons that people write is transcend their own time and place. Why would Jimmy say that he is terrified of people knowing this about him? Wouldnt they know it anyway?
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Postby Sheena » Mon Dec 26, 2016 5:27 pm

Mike has real talent. Needs to tackle bigger themes.
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Postby operatormike » Wed Jan 04, 2017 11:35 am

Thanks, Sheena. That last one is about my father. I have a longer version in mind, but time constrains me.

Where are the other writers? Sheena? Clementine? Space Junkie?

Someone please start a poem with "Honor"
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby spacejunkie » Sat Jan 07, 2017 12:03 pm

Honor bribes me occasionally
threatening medals on my name
to be thought of personally
as something more than shame.
But I fight the thought yes
i honestly refrain
From doing anything
that would bring me more than shame.

My heart it aches for recognition,
but my mind it cowers over
I ignore my intuition
And give Logic all my power.

So fear can manifest and shyness drive me away.
and I can hide all of my life until I die some day.
Beware that no one lead you astray saying Lo here or lo there! For the Son of Man is within you. Follow after Him! Those who seek Him will find Him. Go then and preach the gospel of the Kingdom.
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Re: Make a new original poem off the last word in the poem a

Postby Sheena » Sat Jan 07, 2017 1:11 pm

Honor Blackman
Was the best
Of the Bond girls,
But we like
Those real life
Bad girls better,
Fawn Hall, Jessica
Hahn, Donna Rice.
Cristie Keeler and Mandy
Rice-Davies, colleagues
In clap. Clap-clap-clap.
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Postby operatormike » Mon Jan 09, 2017 11:27 am

Clap-clap-clap
the sky applauds the dazzling light display
Boom-boom-boom
the danger is getting dangerously closer
Flash-crackle BANG
my heart jumps,
breathe, breathe, breathe,
remember to breathe
RO-RO-RO
the dog chimes in
there, there, there
now
it's only a storm
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby operatormike » Mon Jan 09, 2017 11:33 am

some day
when we see eachother
as eachothers brother
and eachothers mother
who we really are.
some day
when respect and love
outweighs fear and hate
its not too late
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby Sheena » Mon Jan 09, 2017 6:28 pm

Nice control of pentameter by Mike in the some day poem, each line 5 strong beats with no or little unstressed syllables. We would like to see some carryover of structure, ending in the shocking iamb. Means a few more 5 beat lines.
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Postby operatormike » Tue Jan 10, 2017 10:55 am

Late. the word they call him
he does not respond
lays there ever calmly
something must be wrong.

Why? I wonder, why him?
Of life he was so fond
yet lying right beside him
a symbol of our bond...

The book he used to teach me
when I was just a lad
the words that once did reach me
now make me feel so sad.

And yet I have a feeling
that from this deep dark blue
our hearts will find a healing
and learn to laugh anew.

Our Dad had loved us deeply
and in my heart I know
although the path is steep, we
will live and love and grow.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby cannydreams » Fri Apr 14, 2017 12:20 pm

Grow little one and learn to be strong
Life isn't easy and many times wrong.
Be good to yourself and others around you
and hopefully they'll be the same way back too.
" Better never to have met you in my dream than to wake and reach for hands that are not there."
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Postby operatormike » Mon Apr 17, 2017 9:35 am

Too, I want to join in
Free, I want to play
For my heart is open
alive I want to stay.
Stay and play with you friend
Open your heart up, too.
Play and learn to be free
Join in laughter, two.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
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Postby tripursl » Fri May 05, 2017 10:50 am

Two together in one,
In one they were all.
In all they were love.
In love they were perfect.
Perfect was the two,
As the walked down
That broken road.
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Postby operatormike » Mon May 08, 2017 9:13 am

Nicely done, dream child Tripursl.

Road broken down by time,
Code spoken crowned by rhyme.
Spirit woken up to see
time past and yet to be.
Mend the broken road today
Lend a spoken word to say
Here's my hand, my help for you
No demand for payment due.
With your word to mend a heart
Pave the road, a brand new start.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
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Postby cannydreams » Sat May 13, 2017 12:38 pm

Start thinking back fondly now
One can never that road again
Walk invisibly with if they allow.
This is all you have left
Bereft.
" Better never to have met you in my dream than to wake and reach for hands that are not there."
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Postby operatormike » Mon May 15, 2017 10:06 am

Bereft, I am left here without you now.
I do not want to accept you are gone.
You left me to live without you somehow.
How do you expect my life to go on?
You were my life, my friend, part of my soul.
It makes me mad at you, at me, at God,
at the world, let it go down a black hole!
Who can stop this loss, this feeling so odd?
Can God, can you? can anyone help me?
I would gladly give all of me for peace.
Yet I see now,no one can set me free.
This deep blue sea I sail will one day cease.
The clouds will part, the sun will brightly shine.
And I will walk again through the flowers,
with thanks to God and you and friends of mine,
Who did help me through my darkest hours.
Who looks outside, dreams;
Dream, dream away
Magic in the air
Was magic in the air?
I believe, yes I believe
More I cannot say
What more can I say?---John Lennon
who looks insided, awakens! ---Carl Jung
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Postby spacejunkie » Sun May 21, 2017 7:17 am

Hours seem alot like sand
Falling through the timing glass
Moving with the second hand
Making sure eternity lasts...

Yes minutes seeem alot like
Rulers on a counter top
and music playing
music stops.


seconds seem like prison cells
Counting bricks and Record Sales
Waiting for a strangers smile
To Make a better day.

And days get me started but
I would rather leave the door shut
on weeks and months and years
I would rather be here...
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